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I came here to read some fanfiction, the grammar of which does not really concern me unless it's difficult to read. I like this, really, and I'm definitely looking forward to more chapters. :D

I really loved it. Looking forward to lots more!

I was afraid I made Rin too self-aware. I can see why you'd think this after reading that, but it's not so obvious that I noticed it during the story. I honestly think her dialogue would be rather hard to write anyway, if that helps you cut yourself a bit of slack. Also, maybe put your song suggest...

I really enjoyed reading this, thank you for writing it! It truly left off at a great point for you to continue it, and I hope you do - I for one would love to see what happens.