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by Jaspirian
Sat Nov 02, 2013 7:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
Replies: 83
Views: 35882

Re: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (10/31)

An excellent idea. Consider it done.
by Jaspirian
Fri Nov 01, 2013 1:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
Replies: 83
Views: 35882

Re: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (10/31)

Ah, I see. That's where the confusion's coming in. this image may help your understanding. To reach Karen's route, you'd follow this series of choices: Why? Think I got everything. Play defensively. Sorry for startling you. She wasn't cute. Read my book. Maybe. Don't drag me into this! Only bolded c...
by Jaspirian
Fri Nov 01, 2013 11:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
Replies: 83
Views: 35882

Re: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (10/31)

Oscar has a good head on his shoulders, though the full truth won't come out for another 8 installments or so. As to the time skipping: no scenes are actually skipped in this post. This scene assortment takes place at around the same time as Paint by Numbers/Things you can do/Event Horizon. However,...
by Jaspirian
Fri Nov 01, 2013 4:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
Replies: 83
Views: 35882

Re: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (10/31)

You are absolutely correct. I've changed that; thank you.

They don't know quite who this girl is just yet--but they will, in just a few chapters.
by Jaspirian
Fri Nov 01, 2013 3:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
Replies: 83
Views: 35882

Re: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (10/31)

“My spies tell me you haven’t been to the track or the pool recently, Hisao. Have you been sneaking in some exercise on the side?” I laugh a little nervously. “Well, sort of. I’ve been walking everywhere…” Maybe it’s his unassuming smile, but the sudden flash of steel in his demeanor catches me off ...
by Jaspirian
Fri Nov 01, 2013 3:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
Replies: 83
Views: 35882

Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)

Who is Karen? Karen is a 2nd-year student diagnosed with [REDACTED] currently attending Yamaku. She is an original character and does not appear in the visual novel Katawa Shoujo. How should this pseudo-route be read? I must apologize for the beginning, which will be a little rough. This story foll...
by Jaspirian
Wed Oct 30, 2013 10:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 210631

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 8/22]

It would most certainly credit you. Thank you for the blessing.
Glad I could help on the errors.
by Jaspirian
Wed Oct 30, 2013 10:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 210631

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 8/22]

It would most certainly credit you. Thank you for the blessing.
Glad I could help on the errors.
by Jaspirian
Thu Oct 24, 2013 3:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 210631

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 8/22]

In chapter 8, Kenji knows Hisao's heart problem. How?

In 17, there is this passage:
Why did Ito went into such a long-winded explanation about Shostakovich?
It should read "Ito go".

Hypothetically speaking, would you give permission for an OC to have been pre-cataclysm friends with Kagami?
by Jaspirian
Wed Feb 01, 2012 5:13 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: KS Academic Conference Paper - Seeking Help
Replies: 143
Views: 78805

Re: KS Academic Conference Paper - Seeking Help

First let me say that I signed up just to write to this. Many kudos, my good man. Let us know how the paper ends up. 1. Which girl's thread affected you the most emotionally? Why did it do this? Hanako's thread, with a small dip into Emi's (I felt like some elements carried over). I personally find ...