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What, no Papi? WHERE IS PAPI THE HARPY?

I liked the story a lot. I felt the epilouge was slightly anti-climatic, almost cliche (after all, doesn't everyone propose at the end?), but just the same, I liked the story a lot, and the fact that you finished it earns you a big round of applause. CONGRATS!

As before, I read chapters thirteen and fourteen at once. Usually, I have something to say that I had a problem with, coupled with praise, but this time, I HATED THE CHAPTERS SO MUCH THAT- nah, just kidding! In all seriousness, I actually really liked these chapters. Everything was just so ...

Regarding chapter twelve, its been mentioned before, but the Star Wars reference actually works pretty well here. I can't see Misha "loving" Lynda just yet. I still think she has some more development left in herself before she's ready for that. Props to you for recognizing that too, hence the "I ...

Your writing is getting better; I enjoyed chapters 9 and 10 quite a lot! Lynda shrugged, “not my fault where I live the drinking age is nineteen.” “It’s twenty in Japan,” Misha said, “and I’m only nineteen.” “You didn’t care when you were eighteen; why care now?” Lynda asked. She had a point, curiosi ...

I find it a bit funny that in a fanfic to a VN that contains graphic sex scenes, people find it offensive if someone who is about 20 years old is drinking a beer... Especially since here in Germany the legal drinking age for beer is 16 years. I'm not sure about the state of New York. Is the legal ...

Having been a bit behind, I read both Chapter 6 and Chapter 7. Chapter 7 was alright, but I have some things to say about Ch. 6. Oh, chapter 6... First of all, making Misha drink... Oh my god, that bothered me so much. Being a college student myself, I can testify that yes, college kids drink, even ...

This was a much better chapter than usual; I definitely enjoyed it much more. I do have one nitpick- is it really necessary for Misha to add "chan" to every single person she meets? I know within KS she attached it to Hisao almost immediately, but I feel as though that term should be earned from ...

This was a much better chapter than usual; I definitely enjoyed it much more. I do have one nitpick- is it really necessary for Misha to add "chan" to every single person she meets? I know within KS she attached it to Hisao almost immediately, but I feel as though that term should be earned from her ...

I am all about piano covers! And KS's music is perfect for this kind of thing. I applaud you for taking it upon yourself to make some covers- we need more interpretations of the music. I'll take a listen to all of your current covers, and I'll post my thoughts on 'em later :) EDIT: So I got around ...

I'm very impressed! Nice job!

I would love to see an 8-bit version of "The Student Council," since it's my favorite BGM track. Think there's anyway that can happen?

Wow, geekahedron, I can't believe you went through all this all over again! Nice work! It kinda negates your flowcharts, but is still mighty convienent!

A drabble is a story in one hundred words. “Aren’t you going to go for it?” Miki asks. “Nah,” Misha says, watching the girls gather under the balcony as Shizune turns her back to them, hefting her bouquet. “I’m honestly not interested. Let them fight over it.” There is an excited squeal as the bouqu ...

Snorri, I really like this story. I think it has a lot of potential. Personally though, I wasn't a big fan of the whole whiskey bottle subplot. I know you intended it to be an icebreaker, but I felt that using Hisao's medication as the segway would have worked perfectly fine ("Is this candy, Hisao ...

Oh, of course she did. She probably pushed everyone out of the way (with her voice) to get it!

You know, on second thought, someone needs to draw this. That would be so funny.