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Hisao's parents are even worse. It is not just about the hospital and Yamaku. Hisao's condition could kill him, and his parents are denying him a potentially lifesaving cure. They remind me of some religious fanatics who rather watch their children die than agree to a blood transfusion. This is act...

Okay to use italics and plain text. Not so okay to use italics, plain text and different font sizes. Definitely not okay to use italics, plain text, different font sizes and bold. Tie a weight to color-coding and sink it in the ocean. Think of a printed book: how often do you see such things on the...

Hmm. Potential Rin x Death/Iwanako Yuri? Not sure if want. It seems like this chapter doesn't do a lot to add to the story. As I said at the end of the previous chapter, this serves as more of a bridge between Nine and Eleven, and it's more of a Nine-And-A-Half than its own chapter, hence its lengt...

Forget it.

Forget it.

I'm loving these little asides, especially keeping with the canon that Takashi is dickmaster supreme when the situation calls for it. I tip my hat to you. Keep it up, friend.

You should always finish what you start no matter how long it takes; if everyone stopped after the first bit of negative criticism nothing would ever get done. I know negative criticism well given the kinds of things I write about and believe me, you just have to take it for what it's worth and prom...

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nemz wrote:Meh. Immediately obvious troll fic and serves no other purpose. 0/10

Sometimes a retelling of a classic joke takes a little more time to build up to the pun than one might think.

What I'm wondering is how much more gore you can add to your avatar. So my theory is, that Death was probably Kenji, which is why he was unable to alter his past. Unless I got the timelines messed up. In which case I'm drawing a blank on who Death could be. It can get much worse. Also, don't worry ...

I'm very impressed by this story, very well done Doomish. I actually kinda hope this was the final chapter, seems like the perfect place to stop. That was... pretty amazing by my standards. I don't know if it was just the 'edgy teen' in me that liked it or what, but I really really really enjoyed t...

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The little Death hovering in the top corner is what completes it. Something tells me the serious nature of this thread has been temporarily disrupted and I am totally okay with that.

BlackRockHanako wrote:Actually, I don't think it's animated enough. I fixed it for you, and feel free to use my version. (Give me credit)

That's it. This is too good. Story over, go home everyone. I cannot hope to best this.

Grayjack wrote:Loving the story Doomish. Keep up the great work!

And you're only in high school? I did not expect that.

I have about twenty-four more days and then I am completely finished. God help me.

Unrelated, but my avatar has been updated. I think animating it might have been a little much, but oh, well.