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by Doomish
Mon Jul 16, 2012 4:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Banda's Wonderful Smut Compilation
Replies: 208
Views: 92953

Re: Banda's Wonderful Smut Compilation

If you took requests PRIVATELY, THROUGH PMs , then maybe I wouldn't have objected. Maybe that's what he meant, despite not clarifying. I get PMs with requests sometimes too and I don't even ask for them. While it's nice that you're giving him the benefit of the doubt, giving him the benefit of the ...
by Doomish
Mon Jul 16, 2012 3:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Agoraphobia [Mutou]
Replies: 95
Views: 33769

Re: Agoraphobia [Mutou] [Updated 4/12]

DanjaDoom wrote:
Doomish wrote:Salty Tears is a visual novel that I'm writing a route for! You can read about it here (click on 'purpose')!
I look forward to new cripple waifus (they are cripples right?)
Nope. No cripples here! You're looking for Love Despite if you want more cripples.
by Doomish
Mon Jul 16, 2012 12:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Agoraphobia [Mutou]
Replies: 95
Views: 33769

Re: Agoraphobia [Mutou] [Updated 4/12]

Salty Tears is a visual novel that I'm writing a route for! You can read about it here (click on 'purpose')!
by Doomish
Thu Jul 12, 2012 12:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 916
Views: 745047

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 7/12)

I don't think I'm ever going to get enough of this story, even once it finishes. It is so good.

Edit: Also, I drew more fan art.

"You're so moe, Suki. Moe moe kyun~."

"Shut the fuck up, Death, seriously."
by Doomish
Wed Jul 11, 2012 10:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Womanly Competition [A Miki vs. Hanako One-Shot]
Replies: 13
Views: 6046

Re: A Womanly Competition [A Miki vs. Hanako One-Shot]

Sgt_Frog wrote:While I do greatly enjoy the idea that Hanako uses boxing as a sort of outlet, as a way to vent, her loud taunting of Miki after knocking her on her ass seems very OOC.
I am pretty much absolutely 100% completely certain that is the whole point of the gesture.
by Doomish
Tue Jul 10, 2012 12:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
Replies: 203
Views: 125680

Re: The United States of Misha Updated 7/10

This story was awesome and you should feel awesome for seeing it through to the end.
by Doomish
Mon Jul 09, 2012 5:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Slices
Replies: 29
Views: 11252

Re: Slices

Word of advice. I agree with all of the criticism in the above post, but jesus christ do you have to be so smarmy about it? Like, if you're going to give someone criticism (fair criticism at that!), just give it. Ditch the 'wacky all-knowing mentor' attitude because there's no reason for it. Don't b...
by Doomish
Fri Jul 06, 2012 4:56 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Mystery of Tanabata
Replies: 7
Views: 4239

Re: The Mystery of Tanabata

Hisao transfers to Yamaku ... um... sometime January or Febuary wasn't it? I forget exactly. I'm not sure if it even said. Regardless, it was his last year of Highschool, as most places in Japan graduate in March. You're not accounting for the four or so months he spent in the hospital. He has his ...
by Doomish
Fri Jul 06, 2012 1:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Womanly Competition [A Miki vs. Hanako One-Shot]
Replies: 13
Views: 6046

Re: A Womanly Competition [A Miki vs. Hanako One-Shot]

"C'mon!" She says. "Stop trying to hit me and hit me!" Oh my god this story is hilarious, how could it possibly get any better-- Gasping for air, I briefly take stock of the situation, before acquiescing my victory in the most eloquent and humble way possible: "OOOOOOHHHHHH...
by Doomish
Wed Jul 04, 2012 11:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 916
Views: 745047

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 7/4)

I don't know why I love drawing fan art of this story so much. Death laughing like a bastard at poor Suzu's misery is just endless hilarity for me and I can't explain it.
by Doomish
Wed Jul 04, 2012 12:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Restless
Replies: 15
Views: 7526

Re: Restless

Protip for bringing things from script format into narrative: Turn Hiro: into "Okay, mommy!" Hiro said . Turn Mother: into "Mommy loves you, Hiro. Don't ever forget that," she whispered . Take the name at the start and place it somewhere else; instead of 'Hiro' every time, use 'h...
by Doomish
Mon Jul 02, 2012 2:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 296
Views: 177689

Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1

Forgive me if I don't care about the opinion of a guy who admitted he hits women. Don't make me hit you too, I've got quite a backswing with a golf club. But seriously, how weak does an argument have to be to take personal hits on the person you're arguing with? I'd call you a tryhard but I don't t...
by Doomish
Sun Jul 01, 2012 11:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 296
Views: 177689

Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1

Nobody cares what the chapters are called. Slow your roll there, kiddo. I for one do care what the chapters are called because attention to detail like that adds to the content and depth of the story, and I thought it was clever. There you go, getting all cute and aggressive for no reason again. An...
by Doomish
Sat Jun 30, 2012 6:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Freaks and Friends
Replies: 171
Views: 82852

Re: Freaks and Friends

Time Warp-Tan's not an OC! She's the little function that could ! Then again, she may as well be, given that her disability is the only thing we know about her save for the fact that she's not just IN Katawa Shoujo, she's a part of what makes up the entire Katawa Shoujo universe. That said, eerie si...
by Doomish
Sat Jun 30, 2012 12:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Confinement (Miki's Story) [10/30]
Replies: 55
Views: 31431

Re: Confinement (Miki's Route) [6/29 - It's alive!]

You can also click on the title of the post (here it would be the Re: Confinement (Miki's Route) at the top) and it will put the direct link to the post in your address bar. You can then copy it and put it in whatever links you want to go directly to the top of the post from wherever your table of c...