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- Tue Mar 06, 2012 8:32 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Rin's Path discussion *spoilers*
- Replies: 729
- Views: 270079
Re: Rin's Path discussion *spoilers*
When it comes to Nomiya, I think people need to consider the fact that he has not seen the things that we, the players has seen. To him, it most likely felt as a sudden whim from Rin's side to run away from the exhibition without never finding out why. He put much effort and time into it so it's on...
- Tue Mar 06, 2012 2:17 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Rin's Path discussion *spoilers*
- Replies: 729
- Views: 270079
Re: Rin's Path discussion *spoilers*
I wouldn't go so far as to say that Hisao is "as pushy." He encouraged Rin because he genuinely thought it would be good for her, especially after seeing her receive, what he would think were, innocent intentions in the form of support from thier art teacher. The difference between Nomiya...
- Mon Mar 05, 2012 7:37 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Blind Leading The Blind
- Replies: 74
- Views: 30634
Re: The Blind Leading The Blind
next part will be the last. this ended up being just over 4k words, so i'd expect the next bit to be about the same, but if i feel the need, i won't stop typing until i have nothing more to say. Like "finale" last or "Act" last? I hope just act, because I was enjoying the blind ...
- Sun Mar 04, 2012 1:02 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Compromised
- Replies: 17
- Views: 11289
Re: Compromised
I liked it. I thought it was interesting how you took many of the elements of the original game and shuffled them around: Jessica has elements of Lilly and Miki, for instance, while our viewpoint character feels a lot like a male Hanako. It's also there in the art club, the crazy ex, the supporting ...
- Fri Mar 02, 2012 9:07 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Which is the saddest ending?
- Replies: 42
- Views: 19764
Re: Which is the saddest ending?
Toss up between Hanako's and Rin's neutral endings. Everything else is fixable, but these are pretty damn bad for the girls in question. (and for Pete's sake, Shizune's bad ending has nothing to do with Hisao's infidelity . She didn't even know about that.) Incorrect. Go back and run through her ba...
- Fri Mar 02, 2012 4:17 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Am I the only one that enjoyed Shizune's route?
- Replies: 267
- Views: 88062
Re: Am I the only one that enjoyed Shizune's route?
I just had a thought about why Shizune's route has such a long period of time between the first and second H scene. Shizune's thoughts: "I feel really bad that the first time we made love, I practically raped Hisao. Did I push it too far, too fast? I'll back off now and let him decide when and...
- Fri Mar 02, 2012 4:15 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: -
- Replies: 86
- Views: 34086
Re: Little Faith [Lilly Good Ending Extension, Spoilers, Sci
True, but remember this is the guy who took forever to put 2 and 2 together regarding Emi's dad. Scientifically inclined or no, he's dense as lead.Mirage_GSM wrote:Hey, he's supposed to be good at scientific thinkingDoomish wrote:Hisao's not genre savvy enough to think of that, even in real KS! :p
- Thu Mar 01, 2012 10:05 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Bowl of Noodles, a Cup of Coffee, a Glass of Beer
- Replies: 46
- Views: 34313
Re: A Bowl of Noodles (Saki Story)
I seem to recall you saying that the majority of your writing sucks. Are you insane??? It's possible he's only improved just recently, but yeah, I'm with you -- everything I've seen here has been decent at the very least, and often quite good. If this is work that sucks most writers are positively ...
- Thu Mar 01, 2012 9:17 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Bowl of Noodles, a Cup of Coffee, a Glass of Beer
- Replies: 46
- Views: 34313
Re: A Bowl of Noodles (Saki Story)
Nice beginning. I like where this is going!
- Wed Feb 29, 2012 12:28 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Really Depressing Rin Fic
- Replies: 23
- Views: 28351
Re: A Really Depressing Rin Fic
Hmmm. You got Rin's voice right, and that epilogue was just perfect -- people always oversell that sort of thing, but you made it work. Nice job!
- Wed Feb 29, 2012 11:43 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
- Replies: 227
- Views: 152113
Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Yuri? I don't recall putting any Yuri in here... :?: Never underestimate the power of a fan's mind. :P (seriously, since Hanako and Sho didn't hook up, and Lilly's going to visit soon, and both girls are available . . . well, the subtext was already there, and now that they have a perfect opportuni...
- Wed Feb 29, 2012 11:22 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
- Replies: 227
- Views: 152113
Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Meh, it's no mystery. Yuri makes everything better.AHardDayzNight wrote:ahahaha this completely. no idea how you pulled this off. brilliant. although i loved the way it ended on that note.
- Tue Feb 28, 2012 7:25 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: New Experiences
- Replies: 81
- Views: 46576
Re: New Experiences
I have to say, I'm a little disappointed to see it end here. Not that I didn't enjoy it. I'm just... I dunno... I guess I'm a little bummed that we won't get to see their relationship grow into an actual relationship. Still a great story that I thoroughly enjoyed reading, though. Aw, damn. I missed...
- Tue Feb 28, 2012 6:47 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: New Experiences
- Replies: 81
- Views: 46576
Re: New Experiences
The thing that bugs me about this is that both characters appear to think that Naomi looking at Hanako's scars is a big deal, but when it happens, it's almost completely glossed over. The scars are never actually described, there's just a sentence or two of, "Such-and-such ones look more sever...
- Tue Feb 28, 2012 5:45 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: New Experiences
- Replies: 81
- Views: 46576
Re: New Experiences
I like the pacing. This is turning out really well; one of the better stories here. Keep it up!