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The funny thing about this story, something I really like, is that nearly every chapter provides a really good stopping point at the end. There's no central conflict driving things -- after each chapter I find myself thinking "ah, that was a nice story!" and feel I would be content if thin...

Oh, no, I'm still going with that. I didn't mean they were ALL connected, just the big long ones. All of my one-shots (like Some Nights) are their own thing. So far, Cutter, Little Faith, With Apologies, and Braving the Storm interconnect. Hisao just hasn't returned from whatever he's doing at this...

Well, what do you know... Doomish wrote a (mostly) happy chapter. Congratz ;-) Mmmm, yes. Clearly the world is ending. :lol: In all seriousness this was a good chapter. It's nice to see teens who are actually anxious about sex for a change, rather than going at it like rabbits at the first opportun...

Gods damn it, Doomish. You suck.

(also, this is a cut above Braving the Storm and several above both With Apologies and Little Faith. The quality of your work is steadily improving).

Holy crap. This story just went from "pleasant" to "addictive as crack" in nothing flat. You're on to something awesome here, don't let up!

As Heinlein made one character say about another one in his "old pervert days" (when his novels included a lot of poly-amorous characters) "Geniuses have no use for social norms because they create their own." Heh. Yeah, I guess that's true. Once you understand how everything wo...

This is getting interesting. A lot of people claim they think about friendships and coupling and fidelity and such differently than most, but usually it's just an excuse so they can avoid commitments and do whatever they like. In Rin's case, though, I can easily see that being a genuine concern -- s...

That was a fun little fic. We don't have enough Emi around here, so it was a really nice change of pace. My only nitpick would be that getting wet doesn't make you sick. Hypothermia's a concern, of course, and being cold weakens your immune system so that you're more likely to be infected if you're ...

It's a good start. I'll be interested to see where this goes.

Ah, more Saki! Excellent. i like the way it played out. We're gonna need a thread linking all of your Saki stories! I like the fact that we're getting bits and pieces of her route instead of a full blown story proper; it's frustrating, but rewarding at the same time. Kind of like putting together a ...

No one's forcing you to read it, you know. Is there some reason you have to threadcrap whenever it comes up? Because it makes people like you mad. Don't flatter yourself. I just find it odd, that's all. Most people don't intentionally alienate others for shits and giggles, and it strikes me as a bi...

Brogurt wrote:Nothing personal; it's just the point where I stopped giving a shit about the content of the fic

No one's forcing you to read it, you know. Is there some reason you have to threadcrap whenever it comes up?

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FluffandCrunch wrote:Hisao and Lilly have been trying to have a baby.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOPE.

Eh? Why not? Seems like a natural progression given Lilly's good end.

I feel like there are elements of two or three really good stories here, but as is it seems kinda disjointed and mediocre. Also, the Saki bits in the beginning wound up feeling like a bit of a bait and switch later; you're evil, tempting us like that! :lol: Also, I have an irrational dislike of seco...

Oh man, these were fantastic! The earlier ones were very hit or miss, but all of these were solid gold. Nice work.