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- Thu May 03, 2012 6:50 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
- Replies: 449
- Views: 373287
Re: Rika Story - updated 5/1/2012 (mature content)
Hisao is a big baby that relies on Rika for most things. He doesn't rely on her for anything, far as I can tell (well, nothing past getting back to camp the previous night). He's just going with the flow because he's in an unfamiliar environment and . . . that's about it. That's a statement of fact...
- Wed May 02, 2012 10:47 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
- Replies: 449
- Views: 373287
Re: Rika Story - updated 5/1/2012 (mature content)
Good heavens Hisao, you just get progressively worse and worse don't you. Oh wait, that isn't progress at all. It's not so much that Rika is dickish, it's just that this Hisao is the biggest beta I have ever seen. Meh. Not so much this time around. You're overselling the point. What could Rika poss...
- Wed May 02, 2012 8:19 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
- Replies: 449
- Views: 373287
Re: Rika Story - updated 5/1/2012 (mature content)
Miki being the negative influence? I cannot imagine any influence worse than Rika... Who wants to bet she hid Hisao's pills for some some sick reason of hers or other? I'm surprised he didn't call her on it immediately. I thought the same thing. I'd bet money she ditched them just to give him more ...
- Tue May 01, 2012 6:54 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route
- Replies: 153
- Views: 113299
Re: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route
I hope you're kidding! I want the route to drag out as long as it can! I'm loving it right now! Another job well done themocaw, props. Oh don't get me wrong, I'm enjoying the fic. I'm just looking forward to this fake relationship falling apart so that a real one can possibly grow. That and the pet...
- Thu Apr 19, 2012 9:06 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route
- Replies: 153
- Views: 113299
Re: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route
That's "pray". And leave him alone, he'll get to it when he gets to it.advicefrog wrote:It's ok, im sure it's fine...
i hope it's fine
i prey it's fine
OH GOD PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY
- Wed Apr 18, 2012 1:32 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
- Replies: 202
- Views: 99952
Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
I am also digging this story. Don't quite know what to make of the new girl, but she can bring the nasty. I'll be interested to see where it goes next.
- Tue Apr 17, 2012 11:39 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Conveyance (pre-Yamaku Lilly, also Akira in boxer shorts)
- Replies: 8
- Views: 3736
Re: Conveyance (pre-Yamaku Lilly, also Akira in boxer shorts
Mmmm, Akira in boxers. Hard to go wrong with that.
I was hoping for more at the end once she found Lilly, though. A lecture, some alarm ("Holy crap, you scared the hell out of me!"), something. But apart from that it was pretty darn nifty.
I was hoping for more at the end once she found Lilly, though. A lecture, some alarm ("Holy crap, you scared the hell out of me!"), something. But apart from that it was pretty darn nifty.
- Mon Apr 16, 2012 10:17 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
- Replies: 296
- Views: 178026
Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Complete
Am I the only one who would be willing to give a unfaithful girlfriend a second chance? No. But there's a difference between "unfaithful girlfriend" and "girl who finds you unsatisfying and thinks you're subhuman and lies to your face for several months and feels no remorse about wha...
- Sun Apr 15, 2012 11:10 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
- Replies: 296
- Views: 178026
Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Complete
Evidently. Hypothetical situation here: suppose that things would have gone like this. Hanako and Tenshi fuck once. Then she's prepared to do it again, and decides against it because she feels guilty, then gets raped. To anyone who would care to respond, would this make it a bit more believable tha...
- Sun Apr 15, 2012 10:05 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
- Replies: 296
- Views: 178026
Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Complete
And Hisao's still willing to stick with Hanako? After all that?! I understand chasing after her to make sure she doesn't go bye-bye, but bleh. This Hisao really is a spineless worm (Well, whoever said that Hisao would be a spineless worm if he did go back to Hanako). The earthworms of the world tak...
- Sun Apr 15, 2012 4:22 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
- Replies: 296
- Views: 178026
Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Part 3 Is Now Up
How would you (and anyone else here) respond to a prequel to Mendacium? A series of short stories detailing how things began to fall apart, and showing how Hisao was ignorant to the fact, as opposed to me trying to tell the reader that things haven't all been well and expecting them to believe it. ...
- Sun Apr 15, 2012 12:18 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
- Replies: 296
- Views: 178026
Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Part 3 Is Now Up
NemZ and Oddball pretty much nailed my reaction here. Hisao's inadequacies are completely and totally irrelevant since Hanako never bothered to talk to him about them, and instead chose to willfully betray him and lie to his face about it for months on end. There's no excuse for that. None. And that...
- Sat Apr 14, 2012 4:32 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
- Replies: 296
- Views: 178026
Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Part 2 Is Now Up
Certainly, an option is to just turn his back on the situation. He's been deeply hurt and betrayed and is well within his rights to just leave her. But is that really the right thing to do? Yes. It is absolutely the right thing to do, both for him and for her. As I and others have noted he has othe...
- Fri Apr 13, 2012 7:28 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
- Replies: 296
- Views: 178026
Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Part 2 Is Now Up
Sure, I get that, but the very fact that she's thinking this way shows her to be an unmitigated bigot, a hypocrite of the first rank and generally just a terrible person. She's become the sort of person that it's appropriate to suggest should die in a fire. Yup. Remember, folks, this wasn't just a ...
- Thu Apr 12, 2012 7:43 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
- Replies: 296
- Views: 178026
Re: Mendacium
I think you need to read more closely... it's been going on for months, dude. It was definately her own choice, and would have STILL been her choice had Tenshin not finally revealed himself to be an asshole. What's most offensive in all of this is that not only did she clearly begin to pity Hisao a...