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Brogurt wrote:

Oddball wrote:you can expect one more final chapter and then an additional extra chapter that doesn't quite fit but still goes along with the themes

Let me guess; you're gonna go full fluffandcrunch and write some CURAYZEE porn just for the attention

Now now. Nothin' wrong with porn.

This was funnier than it had any right to be. I mean, there's no content here at all, but somehow it still works. Nice work! I wouldn't worry about the rewrites; all it needs is a bit of editing and you can easily call it a day.

Heh. I like thinking things can be fixed. After she blew up on me and I blew up on her (as the first chapter was, again, almost exactly what happened), we stayed seperate for a while. I wasn't going to kill myself and I wasn't on a roof about to jump, that's for sure. We were in the park where we ha...

Miki fucked up, big time. If she'd just let it alone eventually Hisao would have cut things off in a much more civil fashion and returned her feelings in time. Possibly. It's also possible he'd have dithered forever and grown to hate everyone involved just as Lilly did, leading to much the same spo...

Either she doesn't have the slightest idea what she wants (entirely possible) or she's making all this up as a defense mechanism because of Miki's utterly tactless approach. I think it's the former. That sort of shit happens all the time, sadly. And then again, what is Miki doing here? If she was p...

Huh. I'm intrigued. I honestly didn't see this one coming, but I think it's an idea with lots of potential. Please continue!

It's not that depressing, really. She seems content with the arrangement, and it's not like she's being duped. Don't mistake "good enough" for "depressing." (and don't forget, she's not in love with Hisao any more than he's in love with her; they're friends with benefits, nothing...

Oddball wrote:Nobody is doing anything to Lilly. Lilly's not in this story. ... Okay, so she's mentioned in this story, but she's mentioned as having left.

Was I too subtle on who his girlfriend was? I thought it was rather obvious.

Nope, brain fart on my part. I will edit accordingly.

>Hisao uses Hanako as a fuck toy and she's okay with it because she's lonely Even between routes, some things never change Yeah! Hanako's the only one who should be able to use people as fuck toys! What the hell? :roll: Anyway, as to the actual story: Whoops, read that too fast on the first pass an...

Actually, I do hope this branch is going to continue. For any kind of good end something like this HAS to happen. Kind of like in Rin's path... That's a really good point. This would also address the issue NemZ and I alluded to above; if he defends Rika and goes off on Emi I can easily see that lea...

Well, that's novel. Haven't seen Hisao initiate the breakup before. It's a pity, really; I think he had a shot at reaching her here. Maybe he'll do that with the other choice? But if he does, how will he take care of himself? I'm seeing bad ends all around here (unless we get a variation on Saving T...

Huh. That art style looks awfully familiar. I wonder if it's who I'm thinking of . . .

Ah well, excellent story either way. Every story in the thread has been solid, and they just keep getting better.

I'm actually not sure how to answer the question at the end this time... I can see it potentially leading to disaster either way. PICK EMI! PICK EMI!!! Seriously, she's right -- Rika really is killing him. I don't think any other route in the game placed him in the sort of danger he's in now. At th...

Man. I should be sad about that, but it's such a good end I just can't manage it. I mean, she lived well! You can't ask for anything more than that.

I do like this motivation, as it shows her to be a cruel but ultimately well-meaning trickster sort of character, possibly a refuge from a Neil Gaiman novel. Too bad Hanako didn't take it to heart earlier, as that's in large part what makes people treat her with the kid gloves she hates. I think sh...