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well crapshizzles, I take a month plus hiatus from this forum, I come back just to take a peek and there's all this good stories popping up. Looks like I'll be doing more reading again now...

I have to agree with everyone here. I can't imagine how hard it must be to write Rin's dialogue let alone in first person. But you definitely nailed it, it was very Rin.

Well played my good man, well played.

Too good doomish, I was hooked with 'With Apologies...' now I'm hooked with this. Loving the sci-fi flavour to the story.

The BGM selections were a great touch. Added another dimension that other fanfics didn't have. Quality writing as well, imagining the scenes and character emotions you were trying to convey came very naturally. I do agree with scott about the dialogue style, but I understand that you were going for ...

Lothbrok wrote:If it makes you smile then I give you over 9000 I love this fanfic in all it's awesomeness.

Indeed. Robnonymous, Brogurt and Themocaw's works are the only reason I come back to these forums really.

CNB wrote:

Robnonymous wrote:“What…” he still seems confused, “you mean within hugging distance?”

She likes 'em dense.

lol, I'm liking Sho's character more just for the way he responded right there. I don't think he's dense at all, just lying to himself.

win, pure win. All of it!

Again I tip my hat to you themocaw, you have no idea how much I laughed at Hanako's part. Rin's has got to be the sweetest bit of all the sweet bits.

And I never knew that's how Valentine's Day worked in Japan, that clears up some things...it should really work that way ...

I'm horrible at figuring things out as well, but isn't the voice Kenji? All signs point to that if you ask me.

Kenji not being with them from the beginning, despite all of them going on the bus to the facility together.

The voice saying "I HATE YOU AND I HATE THE WOMEN WITH YOU"

The flashback ...

as always, your work makes for a great read, themocaw

Brilliantly done. That is all.

Read em' and weep

scott1and wrote:I'm beginning to like this, and it's good to see sex isn't being shoved needlessly into each chapter.

Indeed, very much more tasteful.

I actually avoided reading this cause of the "porn" in the title. But now that I have I'm glad I did. It's really easy to read, and the writing is definitely a step (or two) above most fanfic I've read here so far. Keep it up!

Thumbs up buddy, keep it coming!