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by themocaw
Wed Feb 22, 2012 12:35 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Things Hisao did you would've done differently
Replies: 88
Views: 30846

Re: Things Hisao did you would've done differently

Emi: "Mrs. Ibarazaki, I know her Dad's dead. I understand she doesn't want to talk to me about it, but. . . Aside from that, the route played out pretty much the way I would do it. ----- Hanako: "Are you sure you want to do this?" Seriously. All he had to do was pause for like five se...
by themocaw
Wed Feb 22, 2012 12:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Replies: 227
Views: 150211

Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)

I like your Akira. She's a complete bro in every sense of the word. :D
by themocaw
Tue Feb 21, 2012 5:30 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Most Physically Attractive Girl
Replies: 442
Views: 146570

Re: Most Physically Attractive Girl

Putting in my votes for Shizune and the MILF.

Seriously! LOOK at Shizune's second H scene! Hot damn that girl's hot to trot.

And Meiko Ibarazaki? Emi's mom has got it going ON!
by themocaw
Tue Feb 21, 2012 3:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Road of Adulthood (Post Hanako Good End)
Replies: 103
Views: 59955

Re: The Road of Adulthood (Post Hanako Good End)

I'm enjoying this a lot. A bit rough, but there's a lot of appeal here. :)
by themocaw
Tue Feb 21, 2012 1:39 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Best moments?
Replies: 32
Views: 11919

Re: Best moments?

Althamus wrote:
Mysterious Stranger wrote:
WHERE IS THIS GIF?!?!!
This so much.
Here.

Image
by themocaw
Tue Feb 21, 2012 1:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Whatever. It's done. (Miki: Profanity and Content Warning)
Replies: 8
Views: 7326

Whatever. It's done. (Miki: Profanity and Content Warning)

I was eight years old on the day that I lost my hand. I was out back behind the orphanage, playing with my friends. We'd gone out a little further into the jungle than we usually did, looking for frogs in the streams. There was something shining under a tree stump. I reached out for it. When I woke ...
by themocaw
Mon Feb 20, 2012 8:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Wedding with Lilly
Replies: 8
Views: 7922

Re: A Wedding with Lilly

This was my request. I like the way it came out, too. Not what I was expecting. Characters were quite in character though, Emi especially. Glad you like it. Sorry it wasn't what you were expecting. I get a lot of that when I do requests off of /vg/: "I like it, but it wasn't what I was expecti...
by themocaw
Mon Feb 20, 2012 8:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Wedding with Lilly
Replies: 8
Views: 7922

Re: A Wedding with Lilly

This was my request. I like the way it came out, too. Not what I was expecting. Characters were quite in character though, Emi especially. Glad you like it. Sorry it wasn't what you were expecting. I get a lot of that when I do requests off of /vg/: "I like it, but it wasn't what I was expecti...
by themocaw
Mon Feb 20, 2012 6:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Wedding with Lilly
Replies: 8
Views: 7922

Re: A Wedding with Lilly

CNB wrote:
themocaw wrote:the elegant poise which had so impressed me during our first meeting has matured into a ladylike poise
A little too much poise for one sentence, I think.
Second poise depoised gracefully with much poise.
by themocaw
Mon Feb 20, 2012 6:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Wedding with Lilly
Replies: 8
Views: 7922

Re: A Wedding with Lilly

Also a question, assuming you plan to continue it, did you make Rin not come, so you can avoid writing her lines and stuff (as it can be tricky, after all), or for some other reason? I wanted at least one person to not come. Emi's the wife. Lilly's the bride. Shizune's the cousin, and Misha would c...
by themocaw
Mon Feb 20, 2012 6:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Random Drabbles
Replies: 31
Views: 13303

Re: Random Drabbles

Added another.
by themocaw
Mon Feb 20, 2012 3:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Wedding with Lilly
Replies: 8
Views: 7922

A Wedding with Lilly

"How are you liking Scotland, Hisao?" Lilly asks, as she pours me another cup of tea. "I don't know," I admit. "I was kind of expecting more sheep. And, I dunno. More kilts." Lilly laughs. I grin at her as I take another bite of some kind of little salmon sandwich on wh...
by themocaw
Mon Feb 20, 2012 12:30 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Best moments?
Replies: 32
Views: 11919

Re: Best moments?

DeZyphred wrote:LOVED THE "I need to use your window"
Someone on 4chan made an animated gif of Rin running out on Hisao during lovemaking to go look at clouds, and a pissed-off Hisao deciding to go have a manly picnic with Kenji and bitch about women.

I just about died.
by themocaw
Mon Feb 20, 2012 12:23 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Valid points that I do not understand
Replies: 39
Views: 13619

Re: Valid points that I do not understand

My thoughts on why KS isn't the story about the struggles of disabled people: because they've already had that struggle. KS's framing story is brilliant: the main character, Hisao, enters the story just before he becomes "One of Us." The girls, however, have each made it through their stru...
by themocaw
Mon Feb 20, 2012 11:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ten Summers Later
Replies: 30
Views: 17665

Re: Ten Summers Later

I laughed, I daww'ed. . . I got totally confused at first as to what was going on in the first section and wound up writing a drabble.

Looking forward to seeing more from you.