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by themocaw
Tue Mar 06, 2012 4:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Bowl of Noodles, a Cup of Coffee, a Glass of Beer
Replies: 46
Views: 33869

A Glass of Beer

You hate doing this, but you have no choice. After all, you're the big brother. Keiji is waiting for you when you pull into the parking lot. He's standing next to his nondescript white sedan, the one with the hidden shotgun in the trunk and the police radio in the dash. He drops his cigarette on the...
by themocaw
Mon Mar 05, 2012 5:37 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: AV Club Reviews Katawa Shoujo
Replies: 5
Views: 3038

Re: AV Club Reviews Katawa Shoujo

A.V. Club and the Onion proper are totally separate entities. They mostly associate with each other as an artifact of a time when they were both part of the same student newspaper.
by themocaw
Mon Mar 05, 2012 5:27 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: KS character as sibling
Replies: 60
Views: 23584

Re: KS character as sibling

Bigbishounen wrote:Imagine a blonde, singing, guitar playing, hard rockin', slightly manic "Pipi-Longstockings" and you pretty much have my sister.
Is your sister single?
by themocaw
Mon Mar 05, 2012 3:30 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hisao's little bundle of joy
Replies: 78
Views: 29592

Re: Hisao's little bundle of joy

The VN I am talking about is Sengoku Rance. It starred a sex-maniac who had minimal amounts of children because his slave knew the spell for magical contraception. Hilariously, because that said slave is unavailable in the sequel due to plot events, the epilogues for that game show that he ends up ...
by themocaw
Mon Mar 05, 2012 2:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Bowl of Noodles, a Cup of Coffee, a Glass of Beer
Replies: 46
Views: 33869

A Cup of Coffee

"It doesn't look so bad," I say, as I finish my examination of the ankle. "Just a bit of a sprain. I'll ice it down for you, and you can borrow a pair of crutches. Stay off it as much as possible for about a week, and you should be fine." "Thanks," my patient says, sigh...
by themocaw
Mon Mar 05, 2012 12:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Graduation: Mark 2 [Shizune good end continuation, spoilers]
Replies: 8
Views: 4111

Re: Graduation: Mark 2 [Shizune good end continuation, spoil

"Oh, what a sweet continuation of the Shizune good end! I like. . . "Okay, Jigoro's a jerk, but I'm sure Hisao can. . . "Did he just draw his sword? What the. . . "OPENING MAGIC CIRCUIT!? OH GOD, I SEE WHERE THIS IS GOING AND IT MAY HAVE JUST CROSSED THE LINE FROM STUPID TO AWESO...
by themocaw
Fri Mar 02, 2012 7:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Bowl of Noodles, a Cup of Coffee, a Glass of Beer
Replies: 46
Views: 33869

Re: A Bowl of Noodles (Saki Story)

scott1and wrote:Ah, Mutou, you old dirt bag you. I was picture some big gruff guy with bullet holes in his coat and 5 o'clock shadow :mrgreen:
When I wrote his scenes, I imagined Detective Gumshoe from the Ace Attorney series as playing the part of Keiji Mutou. :D
by themocaw
Fri Mar 02, 2012 1:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Bowl of Noodles, a Cup of Coffee, a Glass of Beer
Replies: 46
Views: 33869

Re: A Bowl of Noodles (Saki Story)

I seem to recall you saying that the majority of your writing sucks. Are you insane??? A lot of amateur writers - myself including - often say that their own work sucks, especially when it's pretty good. We tend to be our own harshest critics. :) The way I think about it, every creative type is bot...
by themocaw
Fri Mar 02, 2012 12:58 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Emi inspired running/workout
Replies: 2704
Views: 1629986

Re: Emi inspired running/workout

RE: the Emi workout chart: It has a small problem in that it's based on a running plan called "couch to 5k," but ignores an important component: you're supposed to take a five minute warmup walk before you begin the first jogging section. I usually do this by walking to the point where I w...
by themocaw
Thu Mar 01, 2012 9:28 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: KS Quips Game
Replies: 9
Views: 4561

Re: KS Quips Game

I will now proceed to name all the routes after lines from Barenaked Ladies songs. Emi: "Can I help it, if I think it's funny when you're mad?" Hanako: "I know you must have loved me sometime, but now I'm just a toy. . ." Lilly: "I love you more than I did the week before I ...
by themocaw
Thu Mar 01, 2012 9:09 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hisao and his physical health
Replies: 25
Views: 8586

Re: Hisao and his physical health

Yeah, it's almost as if the writers used Hisao's condition for dramatic effect. Shocking. Hey no need for that tone! :lol: But in all serious that's what I mean, in Emi's route he doesn't have much of a problem with his heart other than when he almost passes out running, in the beginning but after ...
by themocaw
Thu Mar 01, 2012 9:08 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Am I the Only One That Didn't Like Lilly's Route?
Replies: 34
Views: 13602

Re: Am I the Only One That Didn't Like Lilly's Route?

I actually liked Lilly's path because it was a traditional romance that hit all the notes. It was a nice, warm and fuzzy feels breather route between the emotional roller coasters that were Rin and Hanako. Lilly's route is like a nice hot cuppa tea on a cold winter's day: nothing too complicated, bu...
by themocaw
Thu Mar 01, 2012 8:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Bowl of Noodles, a Cup of Coffee, a Glass of Beer
Replies: 46
Views: 33869

A Bowl of Noodles, a Cup of Coffee, a Glass of Beer

Using the background from my "2400 words" project. 1. A Bowl of Noodles 2. A Cup of Coffee 3. A Glass of Beer ----- "Hey, mister, looking for a girlfriend?" The man in the grey overcoat stopped and turned around. The girl was standing in the mouth of the alleyway, leaning agains...
by themocaw
Thu Mar 01, 2012 8:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Random Drabbles
Replies: 31
Views: 13293

Re: Random Drabbles

”Run For Your Love, Sick Boy!” Song: “Makka na Chikai” ----- LOL! :lol: I have that song in my head now! *loads playlist* Oh... Oh... DA DA DA DA DA DA We pan across to the appropriate Ouendan team for your appropriate difficulty level reading magazines in the airport bookstore. OSU! Close-up of th...
by themocaw
Thu Mar 01, 2012 8:03 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Emi inspired running/workout
Replies: 2704
Views: 1629986

Re: Emi inspired running/workout

Ah i see, well i don't do the shopping but ur right i never realised that before how stores are set up till u mentioned that. I can cut back yea, how does pop affect the body anyways? why does it make u gain weight the way it does? the sugar?, but what about drinks any suggestions on that, in order...