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- Thu Jan 12, 2012 1:16 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Brogurt's Chocolatey Hanako Fanfiction (Updated Nov 26th)
- Replies: 113
- Views: 48784
Re: Brogurt's Six Songs of Hanako
Just read through all of them. I really liked it! Great work on these, and thanks for some entertaining stories. Usually when I do these kinds of things I'll pick out one or two points I noted to improve on, but since you asked for feedback (specifically critical feedback, which isn't easy to ask fo...
- Tue Jan 10, 2012 5:34 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Confinement (Miki's Story) [10/30]
- Replies: 55
- Views: 31081
Re: Confinement (Miki's Route)
Thanks for the correction, I'll change that up. Damn foreign languages and their feminine A endings! And now she's a covert agent on paper. It's a conspiracy, brah.Mirage_GSM wrote:Nice introductory chapter. Nothing much to fix except for:If I’d ever heard Iwonaka Iwanako talking like that,...
- Tue Jan 10, 2012 6:53 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Confinement (Miki's Story) [10/30]
- Replies: 55
- Views: 31081
Confinement (Miki's Story) [10/30]
Howdy. Admittedly Katawa Shoujo is the first VN I've ever played. I was surprised how much I enjoyed it (and still am). To keep a potentially long author's note short, I was disappointed that Miki didn't get her own route. Fortunately that's what writing is for. I haven't played every route in the g...