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First two paragraphs were ossim, then it appeared to tank, with many typos and text that did more in the way of telling what happened rather than showing what happened. I don't mean to be offensive, but between the varying quality, the quips at the beginning and end, and the very idea behind this, i...

No, I mean I very specifically remember reading a fic before where Hanako was writting a confession letter and planning to give it to Hisao at exactly this same moment. If it's one one that ends with Lilly in the wheat field or whatever, that was definitely some anon on /vg/, and it might have been...

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh snap. Well, I didn't think that would make any sense, since the first half of this thread was me accepting feedback before it became as bad as it is, and so was most of the entire fucking thread for Mendacium itself, and Mendacium 1.1 was entirely a byproduct of me accepting criticism...

But I wasn't giving the troll any kind of criticism. I was just telling him that he's spouting the same point over and over again in hope that it might magically become true.

>Pretending that the insult rather than the injury was the main point
no u

And you are again pretending that the former does not exist, just because you fall into the latter. The world does not revolve around you.

Ooh, ooh, I think I can do this one. >everyone Since my curiosity affords me, I suppose I could ask the same question I did for Mendacium - any regrets? And did you anticipate that there would be a similar reaction? This, just like Mendacium itself, was enjoyable to write at first, but then like I ...

There's the other reason nobody likes him. He thinks that anybody who dislikes Mendacium only dislikes it because they are mad about the subject matter, not the wooden dialogue or the characters being majorly OOC. If that were true, then I'd have received similar amounts of criticism on my other wo...

the incessant "I must explain my reasoning behind this decision that didn't seem to work for anybody" schtick gets old in a hurry. I don't believe I did anything of the sort during the posting of Mendacium, but once it ran its course, yes, I did find myself at the center of a whirlpool of...

ignores the whole community that tells him otherwise because he is, obviously, above them and they are not worth his time, and thinks he is some kind of master troll and everyone who offers constructive criticism fell into his trap. You might want to consider saying things that aren't outright fals...

She has no nose

Shizune: Specsmence Misha: Blissey Rin: Smeargle w/ support moveset including Stealth Rock, Taunt, Spore Emi: SD Luke Hanako: Ninetales Lilly: Dual Screen Espeon, emphasis on physical bulk, and with HP Fire In the order that I came up with them, in case you're wondering. Been a while since I had any...

To respond any further would mean restating things that I have already stated multiple times before.

I will not argue with this brick wall any further today.

Thank you all for coming, and have a good night.

I'm just curious. Hanako has been treated like a worthless sack of shit her entire life. By the time Hisao meets her in the game, she's come to accept that as what he is. Hisao reaches out to her when the rest of the world has turned it's back and (after some horribly bungled attempts and misunders...

How about because it clashes strongly with the depictions of the characters in the source material and doesn't make sense given Hanako's stated goals in the game? She just wouldn't do what you had her doing in that story. That's why it's out of character. And frankly Hisao was less beta in Hanako's...

How does that at all mesh with her whole "I deserve better than you" speech? If she's outgoing and self-hating I see a repeat public victim, intentionally self-destructive rather than naively self-improving. Self-hating is not what I was going for, but rather that she's a confused and tra...