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- Wed Jan 25, 2012 3:01 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Reactions and Reflections (Hisao/Hanako)
- Replies: 11
- Views: 6682
Re: Reactions and Reflections (Hisao/Hanako)
That was soooo cuuute :3
- Tue Jan 24, 2012 2:02 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Blind Leading The Blind
- Replies: 74
- Views: 30634
Re: The Blind Leading The Blind
It's like I went back in time and wrote it myself. Except there's no such thing as time travel, and I didn't write this.charmisokay wrote:I think I'm in love with your story.
No really its good (:
- Tue Jan 24, 2012 1:13 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: -
- Replies: 51
- Views: 22718
Re: Cutter [Lilly/Hanako Spoilers]
I read the first two chapters, and from what I saw they were written pretty well. This isn't really my kinda thing, so I'll just stop here, but good job on the narrative...depressing as it may be.
- Tue Jan 24, 2012 12:42 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Shadows, and Those Who Step Into Them
- Replies: 16
- Views: 7379
Re: Shadows, and Those Who Step Into Them
Still feels a bit like it's getting started, but then again it is the second chapter, so that's kinda justified. I do like where this is going, so as I said before I'm gonna keep my eye on this. Keep up the good work
- Mon Jan 23, 2012 12:09 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Shadows, and Those Who Step Into Them
- Replies: 16
- Views: 7379
Re: Shadows, and Those Who Step Into Them
In terms of introducing the characters, this is a good start, and I'll admit I wasn't looking very hard for grammar mistakes, but I guess that's why Mirage is here. I like the character, and think there is potential for this to be good. Just a question though, is this going to be a romance themed st...
- Mon Jan 23, 2012 11:48 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some Porn]
- Replies: 201
- Views: 174951
Re: At the Train Station [Porn]
Good story, and the sexy content wasn't too bad either. If you continued this I'd be interested to see where this could go.
- Sun Jan 22, 2012 4:45 pm
- Forum: Fan Art
- Topic: ClowKusanagi's Katawa Shoujo Fanart (Finished)
- Replies: 15
- Views: 8639
Re: ClowKusanagi's Katawa Shoujo Fanart (Finished)
This is great, and even better now that it has colour to it. Well done
- Sat Jan 21, 2012 7:12 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: New Experiences
- Replies: 81
- Views: 46576
Re: New Experiences
Yay, some sort of plot is forming...and it's yuri. If you don't like yuri, don't blame me, blame Naomi. -Not knowing who protagonist is. -That said, why are they traveling? -Some comma splices Yeah, rereading it I should have name dropped her sooner, I might try changing it later. Secondly, in Hanak...
- Sat Jan 21, 2012 6:55 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: New Experiences
- Replies: 81
- Views: 46576
Re: New Experiences
New Experiences Ch 2 After we arrive at the the station, there's still about half an hour before the train is set to arrive. I mentally gloat to those who will undoubtedly miss the train that we will be on. The platform has a quite a few people on it, but I wouldn't exactly call it busy. "Mayb...
- Sat Jan 21, 2012 3:19 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Lamb and The Fox
- Replies: 83
- Views: 91576
Re: The Lamb and The Fox
Ravin Rin in a disco...I like it. Good to see this still going, keep up the good work.
- Sat Jan 21, 2012 9:27 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Blind Leading The Blind
- Replies: 74
- Views: 30634
Re: The Blind Leading The Blind
Gah, I can just see my writing prowess shitting itself in the corner, as your cowers over it, laughing.
In all seriousness though, this is good. And long, which is a nice bonus. On another note ,don't know if it's just me, but does Lilly say "My, my" too much? Am I just imagining it?
In all seriousness though, this is good. And long, which is a nice bonus. On another note ,don't know if it's just me, but does Lilly say "My, my" too much? Am I just imagining it?
- Fri Jan 20, 2012 1:52 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Bad Dreams (Hanako)
- Replies: 33
- Views: 23094
Re: Bad Dreams (Hanako)
The story was good, although the mix of tenses put me of a little bit. And even though the marriage was a bit soon, its a FanFiction, so reality can screw itself in favour for a fluffy ending Keep up the good work (I'm giving a thumbs up even though you can't see it!)
- Thu Jan 19, 2012 1:22 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: New Experiences
- Replies: 81
- Views: 46576
New Experiences
Thought I'd post something I had mulling around in my head for a while. Constructive criticism is welcome :D Oh, and if some spellings or terms seem weird, I'm Scottish, so I use the English Dictionary. Thanks to Mirage_GSM for checking this New Experiences Chapter 1 It's been a while since I went ...
- Wed Jan 18, 2012 5:00 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Lover's Gasp, Lover's Grasp
- Replies: 38
- Views: 20097
Re: Lover's Gasp, Lover's Grasp
You may be, but I'm notSperance wrote:Oh, God the lolality of it. What is it about scatological humor thats amuses me so? I'm more mature than that
Liking this, get a nice wee laugh when I read it.
- Wed Jan 18, 2012 12:28 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Blind Leading The Blind
- Replies: 74
- Views: 30634
Re: The Blind Leading The Blind
Still enjoying this. Nothing like a well written fic.
Keep it up
Keep it up