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Well done, this might even help me get back into the groove of writing KS again. Been working on my original fic for so long.

I am sorry guys, I kinda got side tracked with another project I was working on. I shall probably give this one some love over the weekend.

Hoitash wrote:

Mirage_GSM wrote: But flying to Japan three times a year has to cost a pretty penny

I'm imagining parental and Shizune aid in that regard.

I could see them moving to Japan and Shizune has a bill for babysiitng for the next decade.

Ah yes, the perks of having rich friends.

Does anyone else find it funny that *none* of the chars in the game are in 3-1. Hisao, Hanako,Shizune, and Misha are all 3-3, Lilly and Kenji are in 3-2 , Emi and Rin are in 3-4, but 3-1 is the Hufflepuff House of Yamaku.

Fact:
When I was reading the scene with Misha and Kelly, "Shadow of the Truth" starting playing in me head.

Again, excellent work, I think that I might put this on the Fanfic Rec section of TVTropes.

I think that in the Saki route themo was working on, I christened this dialogue choice "Both of you, Just leave me alone."

Good start.

I know, I've been bad, but here's Chapter 3 Eri Nakai was a rather tired and bored little girl. This is understandable considering that fact that she had spent ten hours flying over the Pacific Ocean, and while she had music, books and even assorted games with her parents to keep her entertained ...

This has been very good

Very Nice, Bittersweet like good chocolate. Glad I read it.

You sir are a twisted genius.

Looking forward to more

Sorry for the schedule slip, I hope to have the next chapter up sometime this, it has been tough going due it taking place in what is "slow" part of the story.

I'll have some Shizune/Lilly with a side of Fries.

Actually have a little Flashback scene in my latest fic "Beach Vacation" with an eight year old Shizune getting along with a young Lilly. If you want an idea how they might b able to communicate, google "Deaf-blind Sign Language"

Thank you to everyone who has given constructive criticism. Thanks to Scissors for proof reading for me. I hope to get Ch. 3 up some time this weekend. I also might have some other project starting, including a crossover

You sir are awesome