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Congratulations, everyone. I never personally thought we'd get a release date until the day before or something. I love you guys so much, and actually logged in to say so, rather than posting as a guest.

Chapter 5 will probably be delayed for a few more days. I've been distracted by ponies lately (don't ask). Anyway, it'll be here, just give me a couple more days to write the rest and edit it, and you'll see it here. Sorry for the delay, though, guys.

Devon wrote:>_> Uh-oh. Here we go~

I hope you're referring to what Hisao caught with his eye.

Part 2.

Chapter 4 (Part 2)
Cloudy

I hurried on to the dorms, but there was a teacher standing there, and she wouldn't let me by. I walked outside, my only lead inaccessible, and sat at the mural. It was quite an interesting mural, to be sure, but I was never an art whiz, so I didn't give it much ...

Chapter 4 is here, and longer than ever. I had a lot to say, apparently.


Chapter 4 (Part 1)
Avoidance

The library was definitely bigger than the hospital's, but Misha and Shizune ran away when we got to the door. Normally, I wouldn't have cared, but they never gave me an explanation, they just ...

I'm hoping the bonus chapter will fill in blanks that appear in the future, cause right now this just raised more questions :P Anyway, still going good, I'd say :)

Time answers questions and heals wounds. In any case, I'll try and keep going, but if the chapters start turning out like Ch. 4, I ...

Sorry to post one after the other like this, but I had an idea for a few extras. Here is a (short) Bonus Chapter to the series, which will help fill in a few of the blanks, maybe.


Bonus Chapter 1
Dedication

It was another normal day in the lab for me. All the hours blended seamlessly, but the ...

Here is #3, originally titled "New Beginnings" but I thought it needed a change. This is what I thought of.

Chapter 3
Deaf and Dumb

As class started, Misha was finally able to keep her voice within a reasonable level, but Mutou still occasionally told her to keep it down. Shizune, as I had guessed ...

*snickers at the ways Mutou mangles Hisao's last name*

The more I read of your stuff, the more I'm liking the twist you gave to it.

Nitpick: you sometimes still mix your tenses when it doesn't make any sense to do so:
I smiled, a rather unimpressive smile, but a slightly happy one. I decide to ...

After much deliberation with myself over Emi's dialogue with Hisao, I finally think I've gotten it to an acceptable point, although it probably could be better. (Without further ado, here is Chapter 2! (Hey, I rhymed *chuckles*))

Edit: I caught something inside my writings, and decided it was for ...

I'm sorry, but most of this reads like a particularly bad acid trip. I don't know if that was intentional or not, but up to the point where Iwanako's name was mentioned, I had absolutely no idea what was happening.
The first scene might be a nightmare or a flashback, the distinction of which would ...

The subject actually refers to this fanfic being my first, and likely only. I wish all of you a good read, and hope to hear lots of feedback, though, as I may want to continue this if I'm not totally shut down.

Prologue
Strange Alternatives

As I opened my eyes, a bright light almost blinded me ...