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by Negativedarke
Mon Feb 11, 2013 6:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 192351

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 05/02/2013)

Yes Sisterhood is amazing. It's worth noting it's not just Hisao who's making mistakes on Hanako's route. Hanako misunderstands him and his intentions at times. Even when he's not white knighting, she might think he thinks she's helpless. One of the big differences for Hanako between her route and L...
by Negativedarke
Sat Feb 09, 2013 7:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 192351

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 05/02/2013)

Well really all the white knighting is in this case is going too far. It's the difference between being supportive, and being smothering. It's the difference between "It's okay, I'm here if you need me" and "Don't you worry your pretty little head, I'll take care of everything" O...
by Negativedarke
Fri Feb 08, 2013 11:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 192351

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 05/02/2013)

Well there are going to be differing takes on something as complex as Hanako's feelings. I personally don't think that the fire had anything to do with her birthday though. In her good ending, (paraphrasing this) when she breaks down crying, she says the reason that she doesn't like her birthday is ...
by Negativedarke
Thu Feb 07, 2013 10:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 192351

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 05/02/2013)

I'm going to go have to go back and check, but I thought Hanako's issues with her birthday were because she felt it was the one day that people would pretend to care about her even if they really didn't?
by Negativedarke
Wed Feb 06, 2013 9:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 192351

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 05/02/2013)

Again this was really good. It was also kind of heartwrenching. Well I knew this scene would be. There's just one complaint I have. Maybe it's just me, but really it seemed like you used her loss of her parents. But Hanako really got her social anxiety from the betrayal of her friends and being trea...
by Negativedarke
Sat Feb 02, 2013 7:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Negativedarke's Fanfic Shorts
Replies: 25
Views: 13024

Re: Negativedarke's Fanfic Shorts

Okay I got the revised version of Photos up. Thanks to Griffon 8 for his advice on formatting and actually using the right words... And to Mirage_GSM for offering to proofread. I hope to get an Emi story up next.
by Negativedarke
Wed Jan 30, 2013 10:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beyond the Rain: (Hisao x Lilly) (18+) *Updated:11/11/13*
Replies: 21
Views: 12068

Re: Beyond the Rain: (Hisao x Lilly)

Hmmn... So is this a sort of take on what it would have been like if Hisao were a little less reliant on Lily, and were able to express that he didn't want her to leave when she first brought it up? Seems like it might be. I'm interested in seeing where this goes. Well other than the obvious, what w...
by Negativedarke
Wed Jan 30, 2013 4:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Negativedarke's Fanfic Shorts
Replies: 25
Views: 13024

Re: Negativedarke's Fanfic Shorts

Thanks a lot for the advice. I should have realized I needed to check for the your/you're, as I always do that. I also see I spelled being as bieng, again. I before E except after C my ass. As for the paragraphs... Ungh, I'll see what I can do. I used to know how to break them, honest! I may have to...
by Negativedarke
Tue Jan 29, 2013 10:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Negativedarke's Fanfic Shorts
Replies: 25
Views: 13024

Re: Negativedarke's Fanfic Shorts

Photo Session Normally when a teenage girl asks her boyfriend to take nude pictures of her it's done for a thrill, or to try and sexually entice him. But Hanako isn't your average teenage girl. Average girls don't have the scars she does. And it's those scars she wants me to take pictures of. “Are ...
by Negativedarke
Tue Jan 29, 2013 10:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Negativedarke's Fanfic Shorts
Replies: 25
Views: 13024

Negativedarke's Fanfic Shorts

Okay for New Years I resolved to start writing Fanfics again. And Katawa Shoujo seems like as good a place to start as any. However I haven't written in years, so I'm likely a bit rusty. Anyways, if anyone wants to help proofread for me, please let me know. If nothing else let me know if the formatt...
by Negativedarke
Mon Jan 14, 2013 11:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Former Sisterhood thread
Replies: 515
Views: 283687

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Actually it's more like I didn't realize how broad the term misanphropy really is. I agree that it's probably more resigned that constantly mad. It's the nagging fear at the back of her mind.
by Negativedarke
Mon Jan 14, 2013 11:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 192351

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 13/11/2012)

Ah a new chapter. Seems to really be heavy on the angst. I guess Hanako is having some problems, and it seems that while she wants to develop more friendship, both with Hisao and others, at the same time she's just having too much of the painful memories come out? On the other hand while she's havin...
by Negativedarke
Sun Jan 13, 2013 10:46 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: If Katawa Shoujo were more of and H-Game (Adult Content)
Replies: 95
Views: 69076

Re: If Katawa Shoujo were more of and H-Game (Adult Content)

Hisao has invited Hanako into his room when she accidently finds his porn stash... Hanako- "H-Hisao, w-what are these?" Holds up issues of Burned Beauties and Scarred Sweethearts. "Don't tell me you only like me because you have some sort of scar fetish!" Hisao- "No! Look at...
by Negativedarke
Sun Jan 13, 2013 4:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Former Sisterhood thread
Replies: 515
Views: 283687

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Hanako said she didn't have many friends before she got her scars, but that she tresured the ones she had. So the way I see it, she doesn't make a lot of friends, but feels really close to the ones she does make. Now between things she says in both her bad ending and her good ending, here's my take ...
by Negativedarke
Mon Jan 07, 2013 11:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Former Sisterhood thread
Replies: 515
Views: 283687

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Okay, so clearly I was wrong and there is plenty for you to cover. Hmmn I really better get to work on my idea for a fanfic, just in case you cover that too. Anyways lots of ideas, and considering it's really about Hisao, Hanako, and Lily, you've got something to go with there. On other news, I've b...