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by Negativedarke
Fri Jul 12, 2013 10:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 193204

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 11/07/2013)

On the other hand, reading this, it's almost depressing to see how truly clueless Mister "Master of Romance" is, contrasting Hisao and Hanako's thoughts. Even if it's just a fanwork, it is implied in canon that Hanako is more observant than she ever lets on (and personally, from experienc...
by Negativedarke
Thu Jul 11, 2013 9:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 193204

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 11/07/2013)

Ah, the Jazz Club scene. To me so, important. We learn so many things. And later scenes cast a different light on what was happening there. I think you handled this rather well Trivun. Although it's been long enough I can't remember what diaoluge choice led to what ending :oops: . Is the next chapte...
by Negativedarke
Sat Jul 06, 2013 5:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Former Sisterhood thread
Replies: 515
Views: 284465

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

I go by what I see in the game.

On the subject of Hanako's hair, while she probably grew it long to hide her scars, it really does look pretty. It's not something for her apperence that would be negatively affected by her scarring. Although I'm sure that's not what her goal was.
by Negativedarke
Thu Jul 04, 2013 7:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Former Sisterhood thread
Replies: 515
Views: 284465

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Well I think Hanako's hair is pretty. And I'm going to assume that it's her natural color. No carpet to compare curtains with.
by Negativedarke
Wed Jun 19, 2013 10:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 193204

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 18/06/2013)

This didn't seem like it was too long, but it sure was sweet. Yeah Shizune and Misha are probably the most terrifying thing on campus. We get a couple of nice moments, like Hanako feeling pretty happy, and wondering what Hisao is feeling. And of course the letter. And we're getting closer to one of ...
by Negativedarke
Sat Jun 08, 2013 9:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Former Sisterhood thread
Replies: 515
Views: 284465

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Damn that fits well. All we need is the scars.

I've got mixed feelings about the lack of KS doujins. On one hand I love any art of the charecters. On the other 99% would probably end up being NTR crap.
by Negativedarke
Thu Jun 06, 2013 10:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku (Updated 1/2/14)
Replies: 217
Views: 90175

Re: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku fics (Updated 6/3/13)

Yeah, think that after a while Hanako will get more confident with Hisao, and accept that he does find her very appealing. I can see massages, and maybe sharing a shower after Hisao has had a run. And cuddling. Hanako definitly seems like the sort who'd cuddle, once she gets past being afraid her sc...
by Negativedarke
Fri May 31, 2013 11:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Former Sisterhood thread
Replies: 515
Views: 284465

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

pandaphil wrote:
Negativedarke wrote:
Nah. We all know Hanako's kink will be the worst of all. Consensual sex in the missionary posiston. That little Perv!

With the lights off. After lots of hugging and kissing. Trollop.

Lights on, and her on top for Hisao's birthday. Maybe even a bath together.
by Negativedarke
Thu May 30, 2013 7:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Former Sisterhood thread
Replies: 515
Views: 284465

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Thanks. Oh and: ("that place is a one-way street and will remain so for as long as I live." - This one was also inspired by a quote from Cpl_Crud who, in reply to some fans speculating on Hanako's likes in that area, once replied that "there will never be anything other than poo in H...
by Negativedarke
Mon May 20, 2013 10:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 193204

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 09/05/2013)

I'm sure the bad ending is going to be tough to write. And I imagine that for other reasons the sex scene is going to be difficult to write. Actually part of the good ending is pretty emotionally wracking too. I always felt that much of what Hanako says when she breaks down crying is similer to what...
by Negativedarke
Sun May 12, 2013 10:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 193204

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 09/05/2013)

Let it be known I am really looking forward to the Jazz Club scene. It's both pivitol, and at the same time you get to see Hanako in a different situation than normal.
by Negativedarke
Sat May 11, 2013 10:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 193204

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 09/05/2013)

I really doubt it would have ended well if Hisao and Hanako's first time happened while drunk. Remember how Hisao felt guilty and that he had taken advantage of her and hurt Hanako from their actual first time, and how confused she was. Add in being drunk... Hisao is going to really think he took ad...
by Negativedarke
Fri May 10, 2013 8:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 193204

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 09/05/2013)

In Hisao's defense he also didn't want to risk doing something that they'd both regret when sober. Emi wasn't drunk the first time on her route. Well I was waiting for this and it didn't dissapoint. It was an interesting contrast between the sober version of Hanako's thoughts and the drunk version. ...
by Negativedarke
Sun Apr 14, 2013 10:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku (Updated 1/2/14)
Replies: 217
Views: 90175

Re: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku fics

I have an idea what Hisao is trying to get Hanako. If I'm right it's similer to something I was going to do in a fic I'm working on. I'll have to wait and see if I'm right. This was a sadder entry. What with Hanako having one of her bad spells. In some ways it'll be even harder for her now that she ...
by Negativedarke
Sat Apr 06, 2013 11:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Negativedarke's Fanfic Shorts
Replies: 25
Views: 13084

Re: Negativedarke's Fanfic Shorts

Okay time for my next fic. Another Hisao/Hanako. I actually would like to do at least one for all the girls, though I guess I'd better play Rin's route before tackling her. I got the Idea for this one from a conversation in Sisterhood's thread about the affects of alcohol on Hanako. Thanks to Mirage...