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by DragoonHP
Sat Jul 24, 2010 6:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Cherry Blossom - A L/H FF
Replies: 36
Views: 15451

Re: Cherry Blossom - A L/H FF

A/N: I really didn't like to post these in the same post as of the story, but I refuse to triple post. So, anyway: Thanks to Wren, if he hadn't pointed out, the previous chapter will have been the first one in the series, And thanks to Mirage_GSM for proofreading my work ...
by DragoonHP
Fri Jul 23, 2010 2:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Cherry Blossom - A L/H FF
Replies: 36
Views: 15451

Re: Cherry Blossom - A L/H FF

Process to bad end, loading, loading! Process aborted. Error generated DragoonHP wouldn't write. Process to bad end, loading, loading! Hanako path is still open :P Process aborted. Exiting system. Finally I have answered post (I'm a bad person). Anyway, I have FINALLY completed the chapter. But you ...
by DragoonHP
Tue Jul 13, 2010 1:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Cherry Blossom - A L/H FF
Replies: 36
Views: 15451

Re: Cherry Blossom - A L/H FF

Well he comes across as extremely insecure and afraid to offend others - Way more than in the original KS... Oops. I will engrave this in my mind. Nothing special. It's just that the average quality of fics around here is quite high. Ah and I thought the much was connected with my fic, not the ...
by DragoonHP
Mon Jul 12, 2010 2:08 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Cherry Blossom - A L/H FF
Replies: 36
Views: 15451

Re: Cherry Blossom - A L/H FF

B.S.: I have to write this whole post again. About the first, my computer hanged and I have to restart my account. I have to say I didn't like this fic as much as others on this forums. The main reason for that is the way you handle Hisao, the protagonist... Yes, Hisao is a bit shy, but the in your ...
by DragoonHP
Thu Jul 01, 2010 1:30 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: If you *actually have* a physical disability, what is it?
Replies: 509
Views: 211372

Re: If you *actually have* a physical disability, what is it?

I don't know, if it should be in this thread or not, but I wanted to ask (from a long time) what comes in the nild physical disabilities. I have three though I think they would be consider mild, or maybe not. Let me tell, and then maybe you could comment: My speech stuttters while speaking and it is ...
by DragoonHP
Thu Jul 01, 2010 1:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Cherry Blossom - A L/H FF
Replies: 36
Views: 15451

Re: Cherry Blossom - A L/H FF

CHERRY BLOSSOM CHAPTER — 5 I feel groggy. There is a soft buzzing in my head. I try to open my eyes and my eyelids resists. It’s the same feeling one experiences after he has been drugged with anesthesia. After what feels like summoning all of my strength, I manage to open my eyelids a crack. My vis ...
by DragoonHP
Thu Jul 01, 2010 1:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Cherry Blossom - A L/H FF
Replies: 36
Views: 15451

Re: Cherry Blossom - A L/H FF

I was never serious about what I wrote. Mayne i should have used a smilie. Or maybe my sense of humour is weird. Indeed. I wrote a new fic two days ago and post in on two sites without a single review T_T. But the satisfaction of completing a story is way better. Indeed. I am writing four other ...
by DragoonHP
Thu Jun 24, 2010 2:45 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Misha's disabillity?
Replies: 1050
Views: 395916

Re: Misha's disabillity?

Misha's disability is that she is actually a Drill of hair. The fact that one of the devs posted this must make it canon. T'is a glorious day Maybe they were just pulling our legs or fueling one of the weird assumptions KS fans were coming with. No one can be sure until it is made official. Though ...
by DragoonHP
Thu Jun 24, 2010 2:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Cherry Blossom - A L/H FF
Replies: 36
Views: 15451

Re: Cherry Blossom - A L/H FF

Damn first time i forgot to log in. Now on with the reply: I didn't plan it that way. To share a secret, the tap on the shoulder was first done by Lilly, though seeing as how big fan of L/H and H/H I am, I chamged it to Shozune. Because i don't want to scar my beautiful thoughts of Lilly. Reply. P.S ...
by DragoonHP
Tue Jun 22, 2010 1:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dignity and Class (Katawa Shoujo/Ouran Host Club crossover}
Replies: 25
Views: 11778

Re: Dignity and Class (Katawa Shoujo/Ouran Host Club crossover}

Good chap.
Though there are some mistakes.
Muotou should be Mutou.

And read this:
http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=2485
it will help.

Thanks and update soon.
by DragoonHP
Tue Jun 22, 2010 12:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Cherry Blossom - A L/H FF
Replies: 36
Views: 15451

Re: Cherry Blossom - A L/H FF

Thanks Leotrak. Corrected it.

It turns out that writing in dead of the night is never helpful. :)
by DragoonHP
Mon Jun 21, 2010 12:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Cherry Blossom - A L/H FF
Replies: 36
Views: 15451

Re: Cherry Blossom - A L/H FF

CHERRY BLOSSOM CHAPTER — 4 Silence. It is the only entity that is between me and Lilly, between me and her answer. I feel as my future depends on her answer. Will that decision really affect my life? I think so. Still I don’t dare meet her eyes; still I don’t dare to breathe a word. Why? Because I’m ...
by DragoonHP
Mon Jun 21, 2010 12:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Cherry Blossom - A L/H FF
Replies: 36
Views: 15451

Re: Cherry Blossom - A L/H FF

Aww, no one helped me. Anyway take Chapter 4, after which I will be gone for a long time. And in between, can anyone give me names for my Chapters? I'm finding it kinda hard to give them names. And if you can, please tell me your views on my fic name 'Cheery Blossom', as I don't seem to know why I ...
by DragoonHP
Mon Jun 21, 2010 12:49 am
Forum: Feedback
Topic: Katawa Shoujo Act 1 Preview feedback thread
Replies: 991
Views: 358313

Re: Katawa Shoujo Act 1 Preview feedback thread

I will just derail this thread for a post longer [couldn't stop myself]. It is beautifully written straight from the heart piece or either you are a master writer. Either case, you now have two persons who will be playing your game in the first go. P.S.: I never thought there is someone like me in ...
by DragoonHP
Sat Jun 19, 2010 1:06 am
Forum: Feedback
Topic: Katawa Shoujo Act 1 Preview feedback thread
Replies: 991
Views: 358313

Re: Katawa Shoujo Act 1 Preview feedback thread

I finally plyed v3 and yes Darroth you were right. There is no differnce in Lilly's expression. I matched frame per frame with v1 and find absolutely no differnces. But there was one. Look at Lilly's eyes. In v1, her eyes have a kind of shine, but in v3 her eyes have a completely dead look, except ...