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Hm, well, erm, considering the fact that school is about a month away from starting it would be best to give this some conclusion huh? Maybe eventually I'll get around to it, but to be quite frank I'm not really sure where I need to go with it anyways.

Thank you all for the reads. Alright, to address some...and by some I really only mean brogurt's concerns, in order: Supersheep was me being...very tired. I don't know what came over me. I thought I was going somewhere with it. No summarizing in the...whatever we call that initial block of text ...

Hm, I like it. It's fluff and who doesn't like fluff. I would give you some criticism...but I can't criticize at all so sorry about that.

I just have one question: How do you do those fancy letter things in the title?

Alright, we're finally back with another installment of SUPERFLUFF. Let's hope this one is as fluffy and super as a Supersheep. Oh, and just to get this out of the way, the beginning is going to be a lot like the original scene in Lilly's Route. Too much of it unfortunately. I mean there are some ...

Ok, let's see, I'm getting some minor Kenji OOC and general strangeness with the text. I'll start with Kenji first. Right, now normally Kenji would be entirely full of conspiracy rants. However, two things. Firstly, this is a bro moment. As in he needs to be the best bro he can be for Hisao right ...

...Finally...done...with...chapter...never...again! But seriously, Date chapters are too hard for me. This is the only one you're getting so you all better enjoy it, but if you don't...I understand. They aren't exactly my forte I suppose. Anyways, today's chapter is 85% Hanako. None of that false ...

...Writing the date chapter to end all date chapters is surprisingly hard. Especially with limited knowledge.

So, anybody got any advice for this? Own experiences to share? Anything?

Trying to write the best darn Date chapter I can possibly write. Needs time. Needs imagination. Needs fluffs. Give me time.

Oh, and can someone please comment after this, it would make me feel guilty to double post. This is in no way extra advertising. That's just wrong.

...Ah, so this is what you were talking about.
Well, I can't say much since there isn't much out, but...erm...yeah...ok, it was interesting.

...I'm going to work on my stuff now before any irrational thought hits me.

Ah tenses, the enemy of all mankind. The destroyer of all good thoughts and countless worlds and the master of a million wise. How I hate thee.

But anyway, yeah, good stuff so far man. Of course, I basically call anything not overly heartdestroying good so take that as you will.

I would like to think that it was an april fool's day post purely because of the lack of transition.

But then again, this is the internet so...yeah.

>the only part with just the two lovers is the lone part at the end >it's not particularly romantic ಠ_ಠ To be honest, I had a different version of events in my head that would have probably lead to something a bit more romantic or something, but that version had a weird characterization moment that ...

“Oh, well, good then,” She finally agrees, mouth twitching into another smile. “I’m glad you like it.” Twitching how? I'm use to a twitching smile indicating hidden irritation. I'm rather stumped because it could mean alot of things when it comes to Hanako. That's about all I got for criticism perso ...

We are back for another fluffy chapter, this time extra fluffy due to a certain fan fic piece depressing the heck out of me. Anyways, well, it seems as though Hanako has been a bit out of the spot light with the craziness of the student council and Emi's actions, which is weird since this is her ...

Side Note: Its depressing This is an understatement. Seriously, if you are the type of person who hates unhappy endings, avoid this. If you are a person who LIKES bittersweet endings, avoid this. There is nothing remotely happy about this. Every FALSELY happy moment is just a big trap for that ...