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konflikti wrote:Tits.

Fuck me, that's a nice art style.

I guess you missed not only the point of extending our possible audience (nobody ever suggested removing the H from the game), but also half of /a/ furiously playing Clannad since the translation patch was made. I guess my wording was misleading. I wasn't suggesting that it was going to be removed ...

Silly staff members.

Why do you insist on cutting out the ero?

Like your main audience now and forever isn't 4chan, who are mostly interested in the game for the unique concept of having romantic relationships with a series of broken goods.

Wake up and smell the semen.

PyTom wrote:Quick! Someone write a scene where all the girls in the school contract a deadly plague. One that is nearly 100% fatal, unless a suppository is issued post-haste.

Get out of my mind.

However, you should now be aware that your fan works are causing distress amongst the dev team, and probably also amonst other fans. Distress... I... No, on second thought, I won`t say anything. To quote one of the staff writers: "Why does he have to use my girl to rape people?" I wasn`t ...

Well, there are exceptions. In some cases oekaki scenes are written to enrich the world (thus by definition, staying true to the canon of the game) or share other perspectives than Hisao's but i can recall only two that actually do so. I think I have stayed true to the canon of the game, to the bes...

Penguinmayhem wrote:You are so going to get banned. Probably.

I should hope that I wouldn`t get banned for contributing. People hardly seem to dislike my "distasteful" stories either.

But enough of that, weren`t you editting the second and third story?

This isn`t finished. Perhaps I could finish it before I leave tomorrow but I`m too fucking cold right now and that`s what matters. Enjoy~ _________________________________________________________________________________________ Early morning at the corridors were bare, decidedly chilly for most norm...

"Life Expectancy" or "Change of Heart" seem to be the least bad Act 1 titles so far. Maybe one of those? Change of Heart is agreeable, though I thought someone might want to use it where it had slightly more meaning. I.E. For example, an Act where Hisao might be warming upto a s...

Not graphic enough. And Hanako seems a little... Forced. She sounds like she`s acting at being a villian, especially with the giggling and the "spooky" phone call, rather than being geninuely distraught and possibly quiet terrified of what she`s doing. And, in the corner, desperately tryin...

That`s pretty fuckin` good. I`m no artist but I think the hair and eyes are fine. How you work them over is down to your own artstyle, rather than proficiently, if that makes any sense. What I mean is, they`re fine as they are. Though, as Celiest said, you might want to try some highlights on the ha...

Aura wrote:Would bear (or other really silly) prints be too over-the-top for Emi?

Lion panties, with a large lion face on the rear, possibly saying `GAO GAO` too.

DO IT.

cpl_crud wrote:Good end for Lilly: Hisao dies, Lilly X Niji end.

Fix`d

Cute, it had some nices ideas in it but I had bit of a problem with the sentence length. Lack of fullstops, clear starts and finishes, threw me off a little bit. So do so many bracketed diversions of thought. One other thing, the word `I` seemed a bit tired by the end. I understand why you left out ...

Yay car crashes. Speaking of which, there was a car crash near where I crossed yesterday. Looks like it was a close call on me. Anyways, if kyon's gonna be the main assistant for Syu, I could be his assistant lol. We're all basing this on skill levels after alls. :3 No. We want the art to be passed...