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by chaix
Mon Jan 04, 2010 4:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao's birthday
Replies: 29
Views: 12335

Hisao's birthday

well, since I've had a couple days to look over it i think the start of my birthday story is ready to go. a couple notes before you guys start reading: one: some of this is pretty old compared to the Christmas fic, so if the writing seems different there is an explanation. two: this first part is ju...
by chaix
Wed Dec 30, 2009 5:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Christmas with the Nakais
Replies: 38
Views: 17805

Re: Christmas with the Nakais

I actually thought about it, then I figured I'd be killed for the cliffhanger/joke ending. plus it would drive me nuts later because it would feel too much like a cop out.
by chaix
Mon Dec 28, 2009 3:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Christmas with the Nakais
Replies: 38
Views: 17805

Re: Christmas with the Nakais

just finished the last scene in this part, I hope that the end lives up to all of your expectations. I'm going to take a break then start working on the other three projects hiding on my computer (another 'holiday', A piece of rin/emi conversation that I want to use somewhere, and another Hanako fic...
by chaix
Sun Dec 27, 2009 3:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Christmas with the Nakais
Replies: 38
Views: 17805

Re: Christmas with the Nakais

sorry for the delay with these, family and DA:O are not conductive to proofreading. two sections as promised. If you want to ask about something please do, there's a few places some people might find...odd and i'd be happy to provide any explanation necessary. Day 4 The obtrusive sunlight forcefully...
by chaix
Fri Dec 25, 2009 2:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Christmas with the Nakais
Replies: 38
Views: 17805

Re: Christmas with the Nakais

are you referring to the conversation he has with his friends? what they are supposed to be thinking: he thinks she'll become distant to preserve his life. he thinks she's really sensitive to his condition. she actually has already come to terms with this and wants to make sure that whatever short t...
by chaix
Thu Dec 24, 2009 12:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Christmas with the Nakais
Replies: 38
Views: 17805

Re: Christmas with the Nakais

quidoo: the markers are mostly for my benefit, mostly to keep things straight in my head. I left them in so people don't get lose track of who's talking midway through a conversation. notes: thanks for the encouragement, i'm still trying to finish the last part (day 6) along with going over the othe...
by chaix
Wed Dec 23, 2009 4:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Christmas with the Nakais
Replies: 38
Views: 17805

Christmas with the Nakais

notes : A Christmas fanfic with Hisao and Hanako. I'm not that great of a writer so bear with me cause this has gotten has become a lot longer than I originally thought. Day 1 Beep beep beep. The alarm pulls me out of my peaceful sleep and into the cold realm of my dorm room. Slowly forcing myself o...