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K guys, a short section. was going to post about another 3 pages worth, but i scrapped the majority of it past this part. Eh, i'll add more as i re write, they will all roughly be the size of the first one, since i don't want to crush your eyes with a wall of text any larger. “Hiaso?” I panic. Who ...

Still some minor spelling errors in the first three pages. And 100 pages seem like a lot of effort - I hope you will not lose your motivation. Oh, and as for the continuation: Need Hanako intravenous fix - NOW!!! No, do whatever you like but remember to write/perform well! If i lose my motivation i...

It was good. I like the characters, they seem natural. I'd like to see it continue. (Shizune + Misha!) Hmm.. It feels like you use too many commas. A lot could be done without them. Or make them whole sentences. That's what I think. Other than that, there's a few typos around. you haven’t taken eno...

Hello there all. I was expected to write a story for a summer assignment for one of my first classes in college. 100 pages, 12 point font. So far it is at around 50 in 10 point font so i can expand it if the story loses momentum. I wanted you guys to see the first bits of it, to tell me if it is cr...

Herro there! Quick question, and i believe this is the right place for this? (think so at least) I was going through the jukebox, and i found a song titled "moment of decision" and i was just wondering where that song was from in the story, as i couldn't find it in any place i expected it ...

Kota wrote:

Theme Song.

epic. that is all i have to say

Saw a thread on /a/ and was like "who the heck is Rin?" So i looked it up and saw, after tons of inuyasha pages, nothing... So i went back, trolled some more, got shizune's name, and put them both in, and HA! here it was, tried it out, and stuck here, although i've just been lurking in the...