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I don't see the resemblance. None.
The truth is. I only read half your entire post before I clicked the link. So 'she' looked like a Hisao, even Muto, before the name confused me.

Wow. That's really amazing technology. But why can't you force feed information from a camera into a person's brain? Just hook them up together, and get used to it. Is it too hard to insert a wire into your head and let your brain work out the processing details? Youtube quote: "But can it see why ...

It was good. I like the characters, they seem natural. I'd like to see it continue. (Shizune + Misha!) Hmm.. It feels like you use too many commas. A lot could be done without them. Or make them whole sentences. That's what I think. Other than that, there's a few typos around. on of her pink curls ...

(Re)read all of it! Thanks for all the comments everyone. I fixed it. Less copy pasta. More other stuff.? I have a better structured idea of what to write now. Writing it is the hard part. I think that's the hardest part of writing something. But I believe I'm improving a bit. Also, the story wasn't ...

A light breeze causes the naked branches overhead to rattle like wooden windchimes. This is a popular retreat for couples in the summer. The deciduous trees provide a beautiful green canopy, far out of sight of teachers and fellow students. But now, in late winter, it feels like I'm standing under a ...

Hisao: "........" Shizune: "..." Misha: "Wahaha!" Sigh, I even hear Misha's laugh in my sleep.. Shizune: "..." Misha: "Hicchan! Wake up wake up wake up!" Hisao: "Why should I, I'm too tired..." Shizune: "..." Misha: "Cause~! Shicchan said so. And you should do everything Shicchan says~!" Hisao: "Ah ...