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Time for akazaji's brutal critique on: Painful History

I believe it was your use of the drum that killed the sadness of the song. Your use of the drum took away from the focus on the piano, which is the driving force of the emotion laced in the piece.

Your drum consisted of a vastly faster tempo ...

A little something i cooked up out of boredom. nosex this time.
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“So why are we doing this again?” I ask Kenji as he passes me his binoculars.
“Counterintelligence, keep your voice down!” Kenji hisses to me.

I take the binoculars from his waiting hands and bring ...

SirMax wrote:

Akazaji wrote:well done.

you should make more.

http://shimmie.katawa-shoujo.com/post/view/1001

O.O also nice. (but kinda doesnt make sense. I mean, person on bottom of stack has to HOLD onto rider's legs.)

well done.

you should make more.