Katawa Shoujo Forums

I tried to fix some of my anatomy fuckups.

Is there still something wonky, as I have next no eye for my own mistakes.

I think this is as far as I'll go on my own. Thoughts?

Hm, that's all very solid. I'd shell out some excuse, but I don't see that to be necessary. I'll try polishing it sometime later.

But the real question is, that would you classify this as acceptable.

Well, that was mostly sarcasm. Go hard. I used a mouse, since my linework is shaky as hell.

Making her Rin was actually an aftertought and lack of wanting to draw decent arms. Done in MSpaint. http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/3454/shitjyg.png --> http://files.getdropbox.com/u/1302126/Rin%20v.3.png Critique, but use silk gloves since I'm 14, AAAAA oh god. Oh, and this is my first post too...