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I'm terribly sorry to be a besserwisser, but this is so awesome that every little flaw has to go away. As a nerd, I just love the entire thing of some of my favourite characters playing tabletop RPG's together.

Aaaanyway, to the point: Vampire: The Masquerade is not based on a video game. The ...

I like the way you so faces, they're very cute in a picture-book sort of way! (i think everyone has given you well enough critique~)
Wow, I feel honoured by that comment. Pimmy, your work is great and I enjoy it.

Cute in a picture-book sort of way? Are there any picture books you can give to me ...

Thank you for clarifying, I now realize that it looks very strange with her hair like that.

Rin. Her clothes are horrible, the worst ones of them all (and most of their clothes are bad). Give me something to work on, please?

Also, Misha and Shii-chan need colour suggestions and stuff. General ...

This is what I imagine Hanako wearing:

Thank you for the critique. I appreciate it.

I was very far away from the original source when drawing these, so that's why they look a bit odd. Everything is drewn from memory. Also, I'm very bad at hands, proportion, perspective and shading, which is why those things are atrocious.

Hanako: Those ...

Lilly's wearing a petticoat underneath the blue skirt that's why her bum looks so big.

You're right about Rin. Is the coat-thing a good idea or should I drop it entirely? Also, I forgot to mention that she wears special shoes with an open fron that enables her to pick things up and such.

Please ...

This is the same person that posted the links, to clarify.

Yes, I'd prefer actual critique. Also, ideas for Misha's and Shizune's clothes are muchly valued.