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by Demothesis
Thu Jul 02, 2009 2:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Communication
Replies: 10
Views: 4693

Re: Communication

I waited for her response and did not have to wait long. I can't be the only one who expected Shizune to slap him to the ground, hard. :lol: I hadn't thought of that, but now I keep imagining Hisao unconcious on the ground with Shizune looming over him. I might make an alt version where she just ...
by Demothesis
Thu Jul 02, 2009 12:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Communication
Replies: 10
Views: 4693

Re: Communication

Yeah, I thought it wasn't very clear what was going on. It was supposed to be she had been getting angry over thinking Misha and Hisao had been going around behind her back and just lost it over that last bit. I'm probably going to go back and edit to try and make it more clear.
by Demothesis
Thu Jul 02, 2009 12:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Communication
Replies: 10
Views: 4693

Communication

My first fanfic- hopefully it flows well. I know my writing has a tendency to come across as rushed and I hope I managed to avoid that this time. The scenario has been in my head ever since I saw the Shizune ending in act 1. Enjoy. ------Communication------- “Hiichan you suck at this! WAHAHAHA!” I gl ...