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the supple, sultry body of the truth, [...]
Good heavens. You've... you've combined Sherlock Holmes with what appears to be some form of Zapp Brannigan. I've never seen anything so hideously innapropriate or so monstrously untenable.

Good show. Please continue. 8)

in a very dignified, uppity ...

All I know is Lilly can pick my popsicles any day of the week.

neumanproductions wrote:<As long as this monster is face-up...>

Well, the card is face-up but the assets... I mean, uh, the monster in question is... well... uh... you know what, never mind...

Caesius wrote:she looks cute! Also angry.

"Okay, which one of you fsckers hasn't been eating their vegetables?"

Wait, where is Emi? WHERE IS MY EMI DANGIT?

I'm sorry, but without Emi I just can't see spending 2-10 hours on this. Well, ok, two and a half, but that would be it.

...and I just realized that this is a story about when the full game comes out. xD I guess we won't be able to see the end until then.

Oh man, if Hisao wakes up at the beginning of the cycle again but Emi "looks different" this time, I'll be tempted to throw an "I love you!" of my own into the ...

Also, Lilly said she was watching . Lilly's blind!
Yeah, but a circumlocution like "acquiring information through those of my senses which do happen to be functional" would be way too pedantic or way too silly for anyone, let alone Lilly. :) Personally I've always thought that the main reason she ...

OK, this is my first KS fanfic
This took a lot longer for me to read than I expected given its length... I kept going over and over trying to splice all the "cars of thought" into their respective trains so to speak. :D But I do think it was worth the effort (though I tend to prefer things which ...

Why, yes, I'm still working on this "little" piece! Wah, I already liked this when it was just Groundhog Day-ish, and now it is Groundhog Day plus Umi no Misaki! I don't know if this counts as a confession, but I am certainly loving this series.

My only criticism would be that the whole bit around ...

Shance wrote:Done and delivered:

There are no doubt pictures in existence which are pinker, and I would not be surprised to learn of pictures which are yurier. But it is my unshakable belief that there is no picture which is both pinker and yurier. Well done indeed.

kosherbacon wrote:“The fuck you lookin' at, stumpy? Move along, ain't nothing to see here.”

Awww, poor Emi...

As much as I cried at the Yasu + Michi story, this one had me giggling. Aimi must be fun to write.

Do you plan on doing any more stuffs? :D
Well, the first thing I tried (about a year ago?) really sucked, but since this got a bit better reaction (thanks everybody!) maybe I will be able to work up the courage to do something a little less narrow/restricted than this one was...

Misha felt a wee ...

"Hicchan? Hicchan! You're awake, hooray! Wahaha~!"

"Ooh, ooh, no, hey, easy, don't move, don't try to talk. Your jaw is kinda wired shut there, and you're... you're pretty banged up, Hicchan. Your left hand is okay, see? But your right hand and arm are a real mess, and your right leg is broken, and ...

Been sitting on this for a couple of weeks now, sorry. Most of them are just minor grammar nits, with really just one exception (that I believe I mentioned regarding a previous version; it's kind of funny how much the "backwards" running track is bugging me considering how much I suck at sports :lol ...

Except "injury" doesn't cover the whole spectrum of the students' disabilities. IMO "devushki kaleki" would be better (has the "cripple" connotation that "katawa" is alleged to have).