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Guest wrote:Shizune has the power of persuasion. Check out Obi Wan when he does the "These are not the droids you're looking for"-thing. It's freaking sign language. Of course, it's kinda hampered by the fact she can't give vocal suggestions.

She has 'Misha the Hutt' for giving vocal suggestions.

My impression:Shizune: A poli-sci major or attorney . You know it. Upon reading this I immediately visualized Shizune as a female Phoenix Wright, pointing her finger at the prosecutor with Misha in the background shouting OBJECTION! WAHAHAHA~! You meant this? http://images.encyclopediadramatica.com...

my point was more about how they will get jobs. Being disabled makes entering the work force harder and there is a certain struggle involved with finding work that is appropriate as well as getting the accommodations they need. Last it's having a boss that can accept and understand their disability...

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Suriko wrote: Four.

I bet it's Misha. What a fat slut.

It's Yuuko, or do you have another explanation why she spends so much time under the librarian's desk?

"Hey guys, let's do something unconventional just so we can rip out the player's soul and shred it to tiny pieces." Isn't that what fanfiction was invented for? But really, if any of the bad ends are meant to be emotionally crippling (that is to say, well thought-out, well-written, and lo...

A very nice piece of work. I liked how you tried to describe Rin without implementing too much humour or aloofness just for the sake of doing so. Another point probably is that you did not try too imitate the pathwriter's style but tried another plausible angle. In the last days I have begun to thin...

I would personally like more Lilly fic, but thats mostly because she's my favorite. I would like to see you write about Hanako's and Lilly's relationship from Lilly's perspective Tell Lilly's story from her point of view. I'm getting a very slight inkling that you guys want me to continue from Lill...

If it comes out as empty cynicism to you, that's probably what I felt when I wrote it. Your cynicism was not empty for me - few things are. But I would like to point out that being a cynic also means being mostly stagnant. Cynicism is sometimes good when accurately judging something because you try...

Better than the second part. Still, there are some points I would like to address. The section about Hisao's heart attack for example seems relatively calm, I would normally expect more panicky behaviour from someone who thinks he is going to die. Rin unsurprisingly doesn’t visit, since she probably...

EDIT: Soooo, I'm trying to write more and am having trouble about where to go from here. I thought I'd ask for opinions. Do you guys want more of Lilly's story from her perspective or would you like me to try to write from one of the other girls' point of view? I have a few ideas either way. I woul...

While I find the whole affair not very tasteful, isn't it a bit overreacting on the political-correctness-Richter-scale? I mean the idea was obviously dumb and why should someone take offense at such a level of stupidity? Plus, it's such a minor occurence it's only worth a disbelieving headshake and...

Who would be Necrons, then? I am probably all alone with that view but I think Hanako would be suitable for the Necrons. Imagine the tranquility and stillness of death like an infinite library where everyone is alone. And do not forget to note that the Necrons have no skin and there is no individua...

I mean, it works, since you guys will nazi out anything i messed up on, free proofreading :wink: Yay, I have not been used as cheap labour force since my days in the navy. However the only thing I can be complain about your in second installment (other than the things politely pointed out by G3n0c1...

Still some minor spelling errors in the first three pages.

And 100 pages seem like a lot of effort - I hope you will not lose your motivation.


Oh, and as for the continuation:
Need Hanako intravenous fix - NOW!!!


No, do whatever you like but remember to write/perform well!

Bara wrote: From what the Devs have said in the past the team itself is probably even more perfectionist and critical than posts here.

Bara wrote: The other is so the Devs can troll us for grins and giggles.

Maybe they trolled you with what they told you about them being perfectionist?