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- Fri May 27, 2011 7:29 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Forgetful [Updated: Remembrance]
- Replies: 42
- Views: 20011
Re: Forgetful [Updated: Remembrance]
With devilish fluidity, Lilly lunged at me, jamming her stun rod deep into my sternum, sending a massive shock through my body. "Gaaaugh!" I cringed as my lungs deflated and contents emptied from my stomach as I was sent sliding backwards and into the wall, hitting it and ricocheting onto the cold ...
- Mon Aug 02, 2010 5:43 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Forgetful [Updated: Remembrance]
- Replies: 42
- Views: 20011
Re: Forgetful [Updated: Remembrance]
Do you have to end every part on a cliffhanger? Oh, and since when is Artemis a boy's name? Well, it makes it want the reader to want more, except the part where it frustrates them, hahaha. Incidentally, Kiyoshi's thoughts are coming from him, so he just doesn't think that girls have, or should ...
- Sun Aug 01, 2010 10:20 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Forgetful [Updated: Remembrance]
- Replies: 42
- Views: 20011
Re: Forgetful [Updated: Remembrance]
Thank you for your comments! I think now's a good time as any to continue the story since my creative juices are flowing at this hour of the night... or day, whatever you call it. Anyway! Let's get started once again ...
- Sun Jul 25, 2010 3:53 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Forgetful [Updated: Remembrance]
- Replies: 42
- Views: 20011
Re: Forgetful [Updated: Remembrance]
Hello all, it's been a while, hasn't it? I've spent some time away from this forum, and now that I rediscovered this thread I made, I suppose I should continue the story. Now... the story was left off at... Kiyoshi left in a hospital after being screwed over by Lilly and Artemis. Let's pick it up ...
- Fri Sep 25, 2009 11:13 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Forgetful [Updated: Remembrance]
- Replies: 42
- Views: 20011
Re: Forgetful
Final? Maybe. ---------------------------------------------------------- Once. Twice. Three times. I banged my head a final time against the wall trying to make sense of all of the sudden feelings that came over me since the memories of that day and what I was previously. Thinking about it, I was a ...
- Wed Aug 26, 2009 6:32 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Forgetful [Updated: Remembrance]
- Replies: 42
- Views: 20011
Re: Forgetful
I almost forgot to comment on this. This is one of my favorite fighting games.Layzuhl wrote:KnowledgeKnowledgeKnowledgeKnowledgeKnowledgeKnowledgeKnowledgeKnowledgeKnowledgeKnowledge
Also, glad to see you guys enjoying the story. I'll see this to the end.
- Wed Aug 26, 2009 6:26 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Forgetful [Updated: Remembrance]
- Replies: 42
- Views: 20011
Re: Forgetful
Here's some more! Enjoy. ----------------------------------- I wanted to hop up from the bed and immediately run to the bottle on the ground and down a few pills to attempt to make this guy go away, but for some reason I just laid there after my comment. The man on the ceiling was still there ...
- Tue Aug 25, 2009 6:30 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Forgetful [Updated: Remembrance]
- Replies: 42
- Views: 20011
Re: Forgetful
Don't say "hat," say what kind of hat. "suit" is such a generic term it could mean anything. Otherwise, enjoyable read. Yeah... I kind of messed up on that. I didn't really know how to describe his hat while I was writing so I just left it as 'a hat' and I just kind of lost my luster and decided to ...
- Mon Aug 24, 2009 9:40 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Forgetful [Updated: Remembrance]
- Replies: 42
- Views: 20011
Re: Forgetful
I like where this is going, its kinda nice to see a fan fic that doesn't focus on the main characters once and a while. Though i'm a bit curious; i didn't reconize the characters you talked about or names you mentioned. (aside from the main/minor characters mentioned and the Lelouch character) So i ...
- Mon Aug 24, 2009 8:53 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Forgetful [Updated: Remembrance]
- Replies: 42
- Views: 20011
Re: Forgetful
Good to see that some people liked it. Maybe I should continue it, I kind of like where it's going.
- Mon Aug 24, 2009 12:33 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Forgetful [Updated: Remembrance]
- Replies: 42
- Views: 20011
Forgetful [Updated: Remembrance]
Something random I decided to write, I hope you enjoy. ----------------------------------------- Everything's so monotonous, it's the same thing over and over again. "It's this, and that, and this, and that..." I say to myself in a slightly peeved manner as I toss random things to their respective ...
- Mon Jun 08, 2009 11:37 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Kenji Ending Cont.
- Replies: 12
- Views: 6362
Re: Kenji Ending Cont.
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- Fri Jun 05, 2009 11:33 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Student Council Perks
- Replies: 5
- Views: 3998
Re: Student Council Perks
The transition from the flirting to fooling around on the floor felt a bit rushed and unrealistic. Some grammatical errors. But good none the less. Needs some editing and maybe a few touch ups, few parts didn't flow the best they could of. The Kenji part at the end is amusing though I didn't care ...
- Mon Jun 01, 2009 10:49 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: What order did you COMPLETE the storylines?
- Replies: 85
- Views: 31086
Re: What order did you COMPLETE the storylines?
A good question, and I have an answer:
Emi
Rin
Shizune
Lilly
Hanako
Kenji
I kind of had a feeling what would happen if I went for it. I guess I put too much faith in Hisao. I definitely would've ended up with Rin first if I 'Took it easy.' instead of 'Go for it."
Emi
Rin
Shizune
Lilly
Hanako
Kenji
I kind of had a feeling what would happen if I went for it. I guess I put too much faith in Hisao. I definitely would've ended up with Rin first if I 'Took it easy.' instead of 'Go for it."
- Mon Jun 01, 2009 10:08 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Student Council Perks
- Replies: 5
- Views: 3998
Student Council Perks
Writer's Notes: Misha.That is all. Enjoy. Also, I didn't really know what to call this... I guess "Student Council Perks" was all I could think of. Ah well, here we go~ Misha nodded, "I... I want to have..." she stopped, trying to find the right words, "I... want to do it with you, Hicchan," she ...