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I like your interpretation of why Shizune never said "I love you."

And the rest of the fic, wow. I'm not sure I have the right words for how harrowing this was. This one hurts to read, and I mean that in a good way.

Oh this is delightfully goofy. Nice to see an underexplored character in the spotlight as well.

What a sweet chapter. I love seeing Hanako slowly growing confident enough to dress up and show off, great spritework too. Natsume and Naomi make for a fun addition to the ensemble.

I can already tell this premise is going to be a lot of fun.

Airhead Miki is a delight.

I also got baited into thinking Koro would reject Saki, assumed he was supposed to be the gay track captain referred to in the VN.

I'm sure this cliffhanger isn't going where it sounds like it could be going, but I can't even imagine where else it's going instead.

I don't know how you managed to make this both incredibly sugary sweet and utterly terrifying at the same time, but I'm impressed at how you've perfectly intertwined both tones.

I don't know how you manage to keep writing characters that I see way too much of myself in.

I want to root for Lilly x Molly, but I'm not sure they have much chance of reconnecting in Scotland, do they?

Also was that a Missing Stars reference snuck in there by any chance?

So I take it Kenji's nudes are all CGs from the VN, which I guess is the prime timeline? But if that's how he got them somehow, how's Saki in there too?

Three Ls in Lilly, one I and two Cs in Hicchan.

Anyway, that certainly was a chapter I just read. I think.