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by SilentM
Mon Mar 31, 2025 9:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Too Close for Comfort - A Post-Yamaku Misha x OC Story
Replies: 2
Views: 220

Re: Too Close for Comfort - A Post-Yamaku Misha x OC Story

I can already tell this premise is going to be a lot of fun.

by SilentM
Sun Jan 26, 2025 12:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: piroska's One-Shots (Jan 25th, 2025: Repeat by Ear)
Replies: 7
Views: 3461

Re: piroska's One-Shots (Jan 25th, 2025: Repeat by Ear)

Airhead Miki is a delight.

I also got baited into thinking Koro would reject Saki, assumed he was supposed to be the gay track captain referred to in the VN.

by SilentM
Sat Jan 25, 2025 2:13 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Ending 2: Leaf Green [25/1/25]
Replies: 65
Views: 84004

Re: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Ending 2: Leaf Green [25/1/25]

I'm sure this cliffhanger isn't going where it sounds like it could be going, but I can't even imagine where else it's going instead.

by SilentM
Thu Jan 02, 2025 4:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Jan 1st, 2025: Roots in the Frost)
Replies: 159
Views: 204638

Re: Crafty's One-Shots (Jan 1st, 2025: Roots in the Frost)

I don't know how you managed to make this both incredibly sugary sweet and utterly terrifying at the same time, but I'm impressed at how you've perfectly intertwined both tones.

by SilentM
Mon Dec 02, 2024 6:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Seannie's Sanctum [New: "Cassandra" 27/3/25]
Replies: 32
Views: 30134

Re: Seannie's Sanctum [New: "Island" 2/12/24]

I don't know how you manage to keep writing characters that I see way too much of myself in.

by SilentM
Fri Nov 22, 2024 12:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Optography" 27/12/24
Replies: 404
Views: 304297

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Anamnesis" 21/11/24

I want to root for Lilly x Molly, but I'm not sure they have much chance of reconnecting in Scotland, do they?

Also was that a Missing Stars reference snuck in there by any chance?

by SilentM
Wed Nov 13, 2024 11:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao's No Nut November (18+) (COMPLETE!)
Replies: 22
Views: 10145

Re: Hisao's No Nut November (18+) (Chapter 5)

So I take it Kenji's nudes are all CGs from the VN, which I guess is the prime timeline? But if that's how he got them somehow, how's Saki in there too?

by SilentM
Tue Nov 05, 2024 1:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao's No Nut November (18+) (COMPLETE!)
Replies: 22
Views: 10145

Re: Hisao's No Nut November (18+) (Chapter 2)

Three Ls in Lilly, one I and two Cs in Hicchan.

Anyway, that certainly was a chapter I just read. I think.

by SilentM
Fri Nov 01, 2024 4:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao's No Nut November (18+) (COMPLETE!)
Replies: 22
Views: 10145

Re: Hisao's No Nut November (18+) (Chapter 1)

Siphonata wrote: Fri Nov 01, 2024 2:02 pm

starting from the second year

Did Hisao flunk and miss graduation? Along with Shizune, Misha, and Kenji too?

by SilentM
Fri Oct 25, 2024 2:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku: The Place Where Dreams Come True - A Clannad Crossover (COMPLETE!)
Replies: 39
Views: 16949

Re: Yamaku: The Place Where Dreams Come True - A Clannad Crossover - (Chapter 20, 10/22/2024)

I know nothing of the source material, but this was wonderfully charming.

by SilentM
Fri Oct 18, 2024 1:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Saying Goodbye To Tomorrow [Chapter 1: Scene 2 - Nov. 16th, 2024]
Replies: 19
Views: 10135

Re: Saying Goodbye To Tomorrow [Chapter 1: (Re)Introduction - Scene 1: Exit Stage Left - Oct. 16th, 2024]

That is a hell of an intense chapter 1, really started this one off with a bang.

Now I just wonder who will be the first to break the silence, and how long they'll take to do so.

by SilentM
Mon Oct 14, 2024 4:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-14 added 13-10-2024
Replies: 62
Views: 82059

Re: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-14 added 13-10-2024

Nice to see this is back. Your English has definitely improved!

I'm a little confused where the tension with Sumire is coming from though. Suddenly describing Kaori as a troublemaker now, 24 chapters in, doesn't feel like it fits with her characterization up to this point.

by SilentM
Sun Sep 29, 2024 5:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can the Sun Shine on Itself? - OC (Asumi) Psuedo Route
Replies: 18
Views: 7667

Re: Can the Sun Shine on Itself? - OC (Asumi) Psuedo Route

This is delightful so far.

Asumi feeling inadequate thinking she's not disabled enough is a trait I don't think I've seen explored before, and I'm curious to see how that bit of self-esteem develops. Her reaction to Hisao's condition almost sounds like she might have the slightest bit of ...
by SilentM
Thu Sep 19, 2024 4:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Nine: Rage Quit [13/10/24]
Replies: 338
Views: 270689

Re: Flutter - Level Thirty Eight: Desync [18/9/24]

Uh oh. How'd Hisao even find that letter?

by SilentM
Tue Sep 10, 2024 3:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Seannie's Sanctum [New: "Cassandra" 27/3/25]
Replies: 32
Views: 30134

Re: Seannie's Sanctum [New: "Cape" and "Bonfire" 10/9/24]

Damn, both of these stories hit incredibly close to home. I know how it feels to not be seen the way you wish you could be seen, to not be able to change a reputation that is now set in stone.

And I know very, very, very well how it feels to be hurt by people you thought were your friends. If only ...