cook I didn't see your comment until I posted the first part act 2
I read your comment and will take it to heart despite what you may see in act 2 (assuming of course)
but beyond all that I just want to say
I am sorry and I will be better
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- Fri Dec 20, 2024 10:37 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Memories for the Future (ACTS 1&2 done 3...won't say anything this time)
- Replies: 22
- Views: 9294
Re: Memories for the Future (ACT 1 COMPLETE! ACTS 2 & 3...not soon enough))
- Fri Dec 20, 2024 10:35 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Memories for the Future (ACTS 1&2 done 3...won't say anything this time)
- Replies: 22
- Views: 9294
Re: Memories for the Future (ACTS 2 the last night)
Scene –Nocturne
The sky above was a blanket of stars, the faintest shimmer of moonlight filtering through the trees. The air had grown crisp, the coolness of the night creeping in, but the warmth from the campfire still clung to their skin. They stood in a loose circle, the quiet rustling of the ...
The sky above was a blanket of stars, the faintest shimmer of moonlight filtering through the trees. The air had grown crisp, the coolness of the night creeping in, but the warmth from the campfire still clung to their skin. They stood in a loose circle, the quiet rustling of the ...
- Fri Dec 20, 2024 10:22 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Memories for the Future (ACTS 1&2 done 3...won't say anything this time)
- Replies: 22
- Views: 9294
Re: Memories for the Future (ACTS 2 setting sun)
Scene –Afternoon
The rain had finally stopped, leaving the world bathed in that peculiar golden glow that comes after a storm. The air was crisp, carrying the scent of wet leaves and earth, and the distant chirping of birds heralded the return of clear skies.
“We should go before the light ...
The rain had finally stopped, leaving the world bathed in that peculiar golden glow that comes after a storm. The air was crisp, carrying the scent of wet leaves and earth, and the distant chirping of birds heralded the return of clear skies.
“We should go before the light ...
- Fri Dec 20, 2024 10:20 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Memories for the Future (ACTS 1&2 done 3...won't say anything this time)
- Replies: 22
- Views: 9294
Re: Memories for the Future (ACT 2 early rise)
Act 2: Kako Monogatari; Final Reunion
(So soon? Yes, believe it or not I got a real kick in motivation after realizing how much of an idiot I was and will probably continue to be in the future. More details in the afterword)
Real quick perspectives switch around and I purposefully keep it vague ...
(So soon? Yes, believe it or not I got a real kick in motivation after realizing how much of an idiot I was and will probably continue to be in the future. More details in the afterword)
Real quick perspectives switch around and I purposefully keep it vague ...
- Fri Dec 20, 2024 10:15 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Memories for the Future (ACTS 1&2 done 3...won't say anything this time)
- Replies: 22
- Views: 9294
Re: Memories for the Future (ACT 1 COMPLETE! ACTS 2 & 3...not soon enough))
Thank you for your suggestions truthfully
and I am genuinely sorry if my recent behavior has been unacceptable
as for your suggestions I do have a habit of writing for way longer than I should it just happens and I'm getting a little better at it
I'll keep in mind showing more about the characters ...
and I am genuinely sorry if my recent behavior has been unacceptable
as for your suggestions I do have a habit of writing for way longer than I should it just happens and I'm getting a little better at it
I'll keep in mind showing more about the characters ...
- Thu Dec 19, 2024 2:04 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Memories for the Future (ACTS 1&2 done 3...won't say anything this time)
- Replies: 22
- Views: 9294
Re: Memories for the Future (ACT 1 COMPLETE! ACTS 2 & 3...not soon enough))
Well I guess that's it
and just so you know I intentionally used "Sayonara y adios" wrong
glad to see you pointed that out
I see now I might have been too hasty myself in responding which I feel now has lead to an even greater misunderstanding and that's on me; I may re-write my act 1 scenes but ...
and just so you know I intentionally used "Sayonara y adios" wrong
glad to see you pointed that out
I see now I might have been too hasty myself in responding which I feel now has lead to an even greater misunderstanding and that's on me; I may re-write my act 1 scenes but ...
- Thu Dec 19, 2024 12:04 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Memories for the Future (ACTS 1&2 done 3...won't say anything this time)
- Replies: 22
- Views: 9294
Re: Memories for the Future (joke preview, at least it was supposed to be)
I don’t think this is an improvement honestly
Kind of need a bit more than that bro but hey...
why don't I fix that :D
No you don't. You posted a massive chunk of Japanese text in an English Speaking forum with seemingly no reason, no explanation, and no justification. I was simply ...
- Wed Dec 18, 2024 1:14 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Memories for the Future (ACTS 1&2 done 3...won't say anything this time)
- Replies: 22
- Views: 9294
Re: Memories for the Future (The first end)
Scene – Number One, Two time, Three minutes, Four Seasons.
A few moments later
I finally reached the inside of the auditorium and... It’s dark, makes sense for Naomi but she should have her glasses to help with that. Whatever, the stage lights are on so if nothing else they should be there and ...
A few moments later
I finally reached the inside of the auditorium and... It’s dark, makes sense for Naomi but she should have her glasses to help with that. Whatever, the stage lights are on so if nothing else they should be there and ...
- Wed Dec 18, 2024 1:06 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Memories for the Future (ACTS 1&2 done 3...won't say anything this time)
- Replies: 22
- Views: 9294
Re: Memories for the Future (school life)
Scene – Wander around Yamaku
As I walk to school I get to the intersection where I last left Mei, I wonder if I should wait for her until I remembered she said something about how her parents drop her off at school and then takes a bus home, so I keep moving.
I’ve always like the winter days ...
As I walk to school I get to the intersection where I last left Mei, I wonder if I should wait for her until I remembered she said something about how her parents drop her off at school and then takes a bus home, so I keep moving.
I’ve always like the winter days ...
- Wed Dec 18, 2024 12:58 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Memories for the Future (ACTS 1&2 done 3...won't say anything this time)
- Replies: 22
- Views: 9294
Re: Memories for the Future (joke preview, because we like to have fun here...I do at least)
Kind of need a bit more than that bro but hey...
why don't I fix that
- Mon Nov 04, 2024 9:29 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Seasons of the Heart (Under renovation...elsewhere)
- Replies: 1
- Views: 3056
Re: Seasons of the Heart (Hisao?)
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Hello I'm making this "hidden" edit to tell you that this whole idea is going to be taken somewhere else to fully realize it's potential as doing it in a novel format while possible it's better ...
Hello I'm making this "hidden" edit to tell you that this whole idea is going to be taken somewhere else to fully realize it's potential as doing it in a novel format while possible it's better ...
- Sat Oct 26, 2024 11:17 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Seasons of the Heart (Under renovation...elsewhere)
- Replies: 1
- Views: 3056
Seasons of the Heart (Under renovation...elsewhere)
Perspective: Hisao
"A Glitch?"
ok so, something happened to the last post, I know I put "seasons" but then it switched to "memories"; I don't know if this is a common problem or some rare bug happened to me so I'm doing it again. Thus the view counter is back down and this is why.
Scene - The ...
"A Glitch?"
ok so, something happened to the last post, I know I put "seasons" but then it switched to "memories"; I don't know if this is a common problem or some rare bug happened to me so I'm doing it again. Thus the view counter is back down and this is why.
Scene - The ...
- Sat Sep 07, 2024 4:45 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Memories for the Future (ACTS 1&2 done 3...won't say anything this time)
- Replies: 22
- Views: 9294
忘れられない一日
ラジオでは悲しい歌が流れ続ける
そしてこの15時間のドライブで私はとても孤独を感じる
そしてその間ずっと、私はただ信じろと自分に言い聞かせる
なぜなら誰もこんなに多くを与えて何も得られないから(何も得られない)
私がかつて知っていた誰もが
私がどうなったか知らないと言う
でも私はまだ同じで、あまり変わっていない
私は自分がどこから来たのかまだ知っている
私は明かりをつけたまま眠りについた
そしてあなたが長い間で初めて私を信じてくれた人だとわかる
(私を信じて)
友達にもうすぐだと伝えて
フロリダの太陽は私に家に帰るように懇願する
そして私は何でもできるような気がする ...
そしてこの15時間のドライブで私はとても孤独を感じる
そしてその間ずっと、私はただ信じろと自分に言い聞かせる
なぜなら誰もこんなに多くを与えて何も得られないから(何も得られない)
私がかつて知っていた誰もが
私がどうなったか知らないと言う
でも私はまだ同じで、あまり変わっていない
私は自分がどこから来たのかまだ知っている
私は明かりをつけたまま眠りについた
そしてあなたが長い間で初めて私を信じてくれた人だとわかる
(私を信じて)
友達にもうすぐだと伝えて
フロリダの太陽は私に家に帰るように懇願する
そして私は何でもできるような気がする ...
- Sun Aug 18, 2024 6:32 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Memories for the Future (ACTS 1&2 done 3...won't say anything this time)
- Replies: 22
- Views: 9294
Re: Memories for the Future (preview)
@Feurox and piroska
thank you for the support
just know that my little "freakout" at finding out that the F@*KING EDITOR of the game I just confessed my love for (don't be weird) is not only still around but also still posting AND said ANYTHING about my half-baked post left me...astonished, yeah ...
thank you for the support
just know that my little "freakout" at finding out that the F@*KING EDITOR of the game I just confessed my love for (don't be weird) is not only still around but also still posting AND said ANYTHING about my half-baked post left me...astonished, yeah ...
- Sun Aug 18, 2024 5:14 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Memories for the Future (ACTS 1&2 done 3...won't say anything this time)
- Replies: 22
- Views: 9294
Re: Memories for the Future (preview)
ok um...I just found out who you are...
yeah I barely looked at the credits...
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