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- Mon Nov 18, 2024 11:35 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Saying Goodbye To Tomorrow [Chapter 1: Scene 2 - Nov. 16th, 2024]
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Re: Saying Goodbye To Tomorrow [Chapter 1: Scene 2 - Nov. 16th, 2024]
Heck yeah, an update! “Well, not exactly. For instance, we don’t do brain surgery here.” AND HE SAID THE THING!!!!! I like how you wrote Nurse in this one-- I can't wait for when he gets named Yamaku's Smoothest Operator later on in the story. That's definitely a scene, right? Also, I wouldn't worry ...
- Thu Oct 17, 2024 11:25 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Saying Goodbye To Tomorrow [Chapter 1: Scene 2 - Nov. 16th, 2024]
- Replies: 14
- Views: 1774
Re: Prologue - Bundle of Mai
StealthyWolf wrote: ↑Mon Sep 30, 2024 7:55 pmBillions of cells fighting fruitlessly to keep this body moving, while the commander of the ship goes mad at the helm.
Now this is a sick line. Also, quick question: will there be someone to say "hey, you-- you're finally awake" when Mai wakes up?