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by fortemorti
Sun Jan 05, 2025 12:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2024 - Story collection
Replies: 16
Views: 7212

Re: Secret Santa 2024 - Story collection


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LETS GOOOOOOOOOOOO

Short and concise, and still I took some artistic liberty to make it about baking instead of cooking… Sorry for that, but I thought this way it would be more Christmas-themed.
Hype aside-- no worries! I'm totally fine with creative license. That prompt was ...
by fortemorti
Mon Nov 25, 2024 10:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Saying Goodbye To Tomorrow [Chapter 1: Scene 2 - Nov. 16th, 2024]
Replies: 19
Views: 10208

Re: Saying Goodbye To Tomorrow [Chapter 1: Scene 2 - Nov. 16th, 2024]

StealthyWolf wrote: Sat Nov 23, 2024 4:29 pm

Gotta admit, I'm not sure what this is referencing.

It's not referencing anything, actually! It's just a made-up title for the smoothest person in Yamaku, which I think Nurse would win.
Now I feel like I have to make that a thing, so that my earlier message actually points toward something...

by fortemorti
Mon Nov 18, 2024 11:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Saying Goodbye To Tomorrow [Chapter 1: Scene 2 - Nov. 16th, 2024]
Replies: 19
Views: 10208

Re: Saying Goodbye To Tomorrow [Chapter 1: Scene 2 - Nov. 16th, 2024]

Heck yeah, an update!

“Well, not exactly. For instance, we don’t do brain surgery here.”

AND HE SAID THE THING!!!!!
I like how you wrote Nurse in this one-- I can't wait for when he gets named Yamaku's Smoothest Operator later on in the story. That's definitely a scene, right?

Also, I wouldn't ...
by fortemorti
Thu Oct 17, 2024 11:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Saying Goodbye To Tomorrow [Chapter 1: Scene 2 - Nov. 16th, 2024]
Replies: 19
Views: 10208

Re: Prologue - Bundle of Mai

StealthyWolf wrote: Mon Sep 30, 2024 7:55 pm

Billions of cells fighting fruitlessly to keep this body moving, while the commander of the ship goes mad at the helm.

Now this is a sick line. Also, quick question: will there be someone to say "hey, you-- you're finally awake" when Mai wakes up?