Thanks! Took me a bit to come up with the premise, but I'm happy with how it turned out.
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- Sun Dec 17, 2023 2:07 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Secret Santa 2023 - Story collection
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- Sat Dec 16, 2023 11:54 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku: The Next Generation (COMPLETE!)
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Chapter 48
The next day I sleep in until about 11 a.m. The first thing I do when I wake up is text Akari. "Ai is right. We need to talk about this." Akari responds almost immediately. I guess she isn't going to class either. "Can I call now?" "Sure." Seconds later, my phone is rin...
- Sat Dec 16, 2023 9:40 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Secret Santa 2023 - Story collection
- Replies: 29
- Views: 77090
- Fri Dec 15, 2023 2:11 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Secret Santa 2023 - Story collection
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Oil & Vinegar
Here's my Secret Santa Submission! Title: Oil & Vinegar For: Grayest Prompt: "Buddy story with Mutou and the Nurse" --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------...
- Thu Dec 14, 2023 5:05 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku: The Next Generation (COMPLETE!)
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Chapter 47
I'm in bed and waiting for Akari to finish her shower. Tomorrow is our anniversary. We're going to the Shanghai, like we did on our first date. Then, we're going to snuggle up and watch a bunch of Bloom into You , because it has been hard to find the time. There's not a better time to watch it than...
- Thu Dec 14, 2023 2:10 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku: The Next Generation (COMPLETE!)
- Replies: 88
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Re: Yamaku: The Next Generation (Updated: 12/7/2023)
And I finally caught up! I can only repeat this is a great story. If I had to criticize anything it would again be that the h-scenes - while certainly better written than most - seem in most cases not to advance the story as much as they are just ticking off new positions... Also, because they are ...
- Wed Dec 13, 2023 2:59 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku: The Next Generation (COMPLETE!)
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Chapter 46
It's been three weeks since we all talked with Junichiro about romance. I was really hoping something would happen with this art club girl, but so far, he hasn't said anything else about it. I want to ask him what's going on every time I see him, but I think that would be a bit much. He must be unce...
- Tue Dec 12, 2023 6:11 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku: The Next Generation (COMPLETE!)
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Chapter 45
It is three days after the incident at lunch, and Junichiro just arrived for his piano lesson. I breath a big sigh of relief. I hadn't heard from him at all and was worried I had permanently burned that bridge. Our lesson doesn't feel any different than usual. I consider never talking about what hap...
- Mon Dec 11, 2023 9:58 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku: The Next Generation (COMPLETE!)
- Replies: 88
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Re: Yamaku: The Next Generation (Updated: 12/10/2023)
I really like this fanfic. You're now past the point where I read it on fanfiction.net last time, and I enjoy new chapters. Usually I don't like Oc centric stories, but your creation keeps me entertained and I look forward for new chapters. Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it! I had some misgivi...
- Sun Dec 10, 2023 8:36 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku: The Next Generation (COMPLETE!)
- Replies: 88
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Chapter 44
Author's Note: Sexual Content "So, this week we're going to be focusing on these projects, which I think will give you all a good feel for what it's like to work in a lab." The other 7 science club members and I are in one of the laboratory classrooms. Ms. Hamada is telling us what we'll ...
- Fri Dec 08, 2023 1:19 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku: The Next Generation (COMPLETE!)
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Chapter 43
Author's Note: Sexual Content The next morning, I wake up a little ahead of my alarm, so there’s no real reason to go back to sleep. There’s no reason to get out of bed either. Not with my girlfriend snuggling me so nicely. I manage to grab my phone without disturbing her. When I do, I see that I h...
- Thu Dec 07, 2023 8:23 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku: The Next Generation (COMPLETE!)
- Replies: 88
- Views: 321502
Re: Yamaku: The Next Generation (Updated: 12/7/2023)
Okay, this story is REALLY long, so I guess I'll just unload the comments that accrued for Year 1. It is long indeed. I'm glad you made it through Year One and you like the story so far. I think your points about the realism in Chapter 0 are excellent. I spent a lot of time working on the dialogue ...
- Thu Dec 07, 2023 5:46 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku: The Next Generation (COMPLETE!)
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Chapter 42
It’s the night before our third and final year at Yamaku begins. Akari is sleeping soundly next to me and I’m starting to drift off to sleep myself. I’m excited to start my final year, but it’s also really scary. I still haven’t figured out what I want to study. Examination hell starts after summer ...
- Wed Dec 06, 2023 12:10 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku: The Next Generation (COMPLETE!)
- Replies: 88
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Chapter 41
I wake up the next morning very anxious about getting an appointment at the orphanage. My mom's train leaves before they are even open, so I can distract myself a little by seeing her off. Akari and I are in a cab with her on the way to the train station. All three of us are in the back seat with me...
- Tue Dec 05, 2023 2:47 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku: The Next Generation (COMPLETE!)
- Replies: 88
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Chapter 40
It's Spring Vacation. We're heading to Tokyo tomorrow for a visit with Akari's parents. Tomorrow also happens to be my 18th birthday, and because Akari's birthday is only about two weeks away, she and I are having a joint birthday party at her parents' house tomorrow night. My mom is coming too. She...