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ramiroflores wrote: ↑Tue Jun 11, 2024 5:47 am
Is this called a novel

Well, I think it'll be about 100,000 words when it's done. So it's defnitely novel length! But...still shorter than my two other longfics.

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I am joining Akane for lunch today. I have the past several days too. It has been the highlight of each day, getting to know her and my other schoolmates a little bit better. When we enter the cafeteria my eyes and ears are immediately drawn to the table where Shizune and Lilly are already sitting. ...

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Frankyo wrote: ↑Mon Jun 03, 2024 11:07 pm
I remain hopefully optimistic but I do come from watching the anime where Nagisa is with Tomoya, so her by herself at Yamaku will be sorta clashing with what I'm used to/expect.

I mean, isn't the whole point of fanfiction to put characters in positions they aren't in within the canon?

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Preface: Some Notes on Continuity Where this fits in Clannad: The events of this story occur following Kotomi's route in the visual novel. In other words, this Nagisa did not end up with Tomoya Okazaki and experience the events of After Story. In her own route, as well as in Fuko's and Koumura’s, s...

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Saki and Kayoko playing violin together is adorable. And heartbreaking.

Glad you are doing a bit better. I know we'll all happily wait as long as it takes for your conclusion to this amazing story.

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I did not expect this prompt to turn into a wacky Yamaku heist story, but I'm glad it did! Thanks so much for the great story.

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Love the new chapters too. Fujisawa seems like a great OC, and Rin clearly being in love with Emi but not understanding it is pretty adorable. Also love what you're doing with Emi, who still hasn't fully opened up to anyone, so she's surprisingly awkward about asking Fujisawa about her disability. H...

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Thanks for the feedback! This story was my first foray into writing fiction, and I definitely agree there are some awkward conversations. Some day I might go back and rewrite parts of it. Your feedback on EDS is useful too! I don't have it myself, but I did go pretty hard on research. As you'll see ...

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I love this. Doing it from the perspective of a newspaper article really adds some serious gravitas to how awesome Saki is. Makes me wish I had thought of it as something of a prequel to Learning to Run! I also like that you tell us not only about Saki's post-Yamaku life, but also Shizune's, Hisao's...

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It's another good chapter. I'm enjoying the slow burn. Thank you! I've been reading your Learning to Run for the last couple of days and I'm honestly amazed at the breakneck speed you achieve. I really struggle with not stopping at every minute detail! I'm glad you're enjoying it. If you reach the ...

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It's another good chapter.
I'm enjoying the slow burn.

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I love it so far!

I'm always happy to see more yuri content in my favorite fandom. You're right, Emi x Rin stuff is surprisingly limited.

Writing Rin is pretty tough (at least for me), but I think you nailed here. Looking forward to the rest!

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I haven't seen very many people call Emi's "Bad Ending" one of the endings that might be better than the "Good" one. Hers is pretty cut and dry. In one of them she never opens up to Hisao and they never speak to each other again. In the other, she finally finds someone she can sh...

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Poor, poor Emi. And the nurse too. And of course the Nakais. It is a long list of poor. Back in 2007, you weren't an adult in Japan until you were 20. I wonder if that means Emi will be treated more leniency. Of course even if she is cleared of all charges, the mental strain of accidentally taking s...

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This is really good.

I feel bad for Emi, but it's a great premise and it's really well-written. I can't wait for more.

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