This is very beautiful sad story, and I think Feurox already described what I felt while reading it, the best. Thank you!
Some possible fixes:
I think "rocking" before "gently" is redundant.
Given the last chapters signs I'm worried that Rima's heart will act up in the adult date. Hope not.
Otherwise, this is very fluff, thank you! Just what I've needed to end the day in the good mood ta-da
Ahaaaaa!
I see what you did here. Clever!
Rika, Rika, you'll be in a trouble, little girl...
Saki part is so sweet I need to check my blood for sugar level.
I think you got in a wrong thread, gunthrum
The main issue is one who'd wanted to bring KS to the PS2 should firstly port a Python and RenPy to the console. After doing this porting an actual game would be possible.
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