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I can definitely see what you meant when each ending would focus on a specific characters arc in the story. In this case, concluding Hisao's arc is accomplished well and I'll talk more on that momentarily. In the context of Flutter's story as a whole though, this gives blue ...

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I'm new to this thread, but I wanted to drop by to show appreciation for this ending story.
I haven't started reading it yet since I'm currently busy with Sisterhood but this one is definitely in my plans since Emi was my favorite route in the VN, so it's nice seeing an epilogue in ...

Though Fuuka's head may have been somewhat in the gutter, I can't blame her for jumping to conclusions. Even rash, poorly thought out conclusions. Rika's attitude being so starkly disconnected from Hisao's would throw just about anyone off (Hell, even just Rika's 180 from the night before is bit of ...

Brilliantly intense story here, Sharp-O!

Photography is an interesting subject. Art can be taken a million different ways by a million different people; one man's "immortalizing this specific moment" is another's "just another second in a sea of trillions". It's also, just like every form of art ...

It's not often I am going to do this here before the start of a post, but for chapters like this I'll make an exception. This is a content warning for a heavy topic. If you want to go into this chapter blind, ignore this and proceed. Otherwise, for those that may be sensitive to certain topics and ...

Peorth wrote: Tue Nov 26, 2024 11:28 pm

I believe a given name is one's first name, you're thinking of surnames/family names.

You are correct. Fixed it (I fixed it back when you commented. I just usually wait to reply so I can respond in batches, if need be).

Whoa! Was definitely not expecting to see LiS on this forum, so it's a pleasant surprise! LiS was one of my favourite games a couple of years ago and while I haven't gone back to it in a while, it's lovely to revisit the characters and their quirks.


Gonna be honest, completely forgot to respond ...

Scene 5: Unwelcome Reflections and the Girl Left on her Own

Chapter 2: Building Tension

It’s amazing how a lot of really small concerns can build and build and build. After Hisao joined in, the four of us had a short conversation before Mom reached her limit and went back to the car, then ...

Another brilliant chapter! It's super interesting to have Mai and Hisao have to directly confront their past at the same time as their own mortality. Should make for an interesting dynamic and I can imagine the extended cast making things more awkward once they find out the connection.


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Nice little follow-up to the first one! Lilly's perspective is a fun challenge to take on and I think you did a great job with this little short. And the ending is very in character for her. Would be interested in more peaks into this part of the world! (Though, I still need to read monomyth, funny ...

That's actually quite shocking to me, because I believe it's always best and most comfortable to write for a person if you have the personality (or similar) of that person. For example, I'm a stoic, hard-working, and efficient person, so writing Shizune is easy for me. Meanwhile, I encounter big ...

Just a few orthography things here and there,


Thanks for pointing these out, corrected the ones that were clear mistakes. Though I will say there's some I disagree with. Aside from that, I did want to say that while "There're" is more grammatically correct, it is a significantly less common ...

Found this while searching to see if there were any other takes on Ikuno in KS, specifically fan-art, and I've gotta say, this was a fun little story! I liked the twist and implications there-in. There's not many Ikunos around, and this is certainly a different take from the couple I've seen or ...

Chapter 1: (Re)Introduction

Scene 2: Past in Present

The bed jolts, waking me up. I’m moving. Why am I moving?

“Hold up, she’s coming to.” Who is that? Why is a man in my room? “Please take… wait over there… meet… office… later.” Wait over where? Meet? Who? What? When? Is that Nurse? Why is ...

Guessing by the next chapter here: the central conflict of the story, here we go!


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Maintaining relationships is harder than getting into relationship in the first place (divorce rate may bring your faith in humanity into very low points lol). I wonder how it will be resolved ...