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Reminds me of some proofreading edits I had back from Lap recently where he kept asking what 'Room for a little one?' meant.

OK, fine - I'll bite; what does "Room for a little one?" mean? (no - Urban Dictionary was no help, I checked)

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Nice one - fun and unexpected; fertile ground for future stories I'm sure! Also - seems I'm not the only one with dancing on the mind

sat all on her tod…

is this slang? If so, it's from a part of the world I haven't been to.

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Story Title : Shake, Shake, Shake Author : Asoko_Desu Type : Side-Story - part of "Adventures in the 'Emiverse'" Status : One in a series PoV-character : Hisao Pairings : Rin x Tetsu Begins : After Mama Bears Warnings : Silly, but no one can be unhappy all the time, one hopes. Remarks : What the ...

Very engaging and thought-provoking - and enjoyable! It left me with questions, but, like Rin, I'm unable to put them into words right now .. how very appropriate. I think I'll bookmark this one and come back to it again after having had a chance to reflect on it. And thank you for posting your ...

Ah - all the suaveity (is that even a word? Suaveishnes? No, probably not) we all wish we had :) I really like what you did to bring out the chemistry between two characters who aren't often in the spotlight together (Ever together? I keep finding gems hidden in posts from years ago so who knows ...

Really sweet, well-written, and completely believable 🙂 One suggestion - ‘translate’ / ‘translating’ would be ‘interpret’ / ‘interpreting' in my locale, in a sign language context - ie. one would retain a 'sign language interpreter' for situations such as these (don’t know why - possibly because one- ...

When I grow up I want to write like you do - that was really wonderful; the characterizations were especially vivid. What I very much appreciated - Something from Suzu’s perspective; I have’t seen a lot of that. I also appreciated getting inside her head a bit - character’s thoughts are always inter ...

Better eleven+ years late to the party than never I guess. Very well done one-shot; a very good characterization of how Rin communicates her emotions, and how Hisao finally sees things from her perspective - so much hope. For the record, I think that Rin’s not at all good at forgetting - she just w ...

I've certainly upset the apple cart here with some of my characterisation choices but I think/hope they make a certain amount of sense given context. Dust Bath is interesting, I did like the visual of Rin's mind being a series of drawers with timers she always means to come back to. Aye - that's ...

That was nice - too bad the image it links to is mssing. I think I see what you mean by ‘recontextualise KS into a different kind of space’ though .. and now I have a lot more one-shots to read! Not entirely in the same vein, but you might enjoy Dust Bath . It recontextualizes the characters, but not ...

Thank you! It was fun to write - glad you enjoyed it!

Speaking of, I've been reading Flutter and very much enjoying it - your style of writing is drastically different from mine and it's refreshing. Waiting until I get caught up before commenting, but that might take a while

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Story Title : Noughts and Crosses (complete) Author : Asoko_Desu Type : Side-Story - part of "Adventures in the 'Emiverse'" Status : One in a series PoV-characte r: Rin’s parents - Mr. and Mrs. Tezuka Pairings : Rin x Tetsu Begins : After Home Phone for Sweetie Warnings : Painfully homey Remarks : ...

And so the intrepid couple is off to a running start in their life together - no pressure! Looking forward to seeing where university and paternal oversight takes them - I suspect an apartment of their own is in their future :) One note - you may be using the same text processor as I do; some of ...

Thanks for updating this, else I might have missed it. It’s bold, thoughtful, and well-written. Others have done a better job of in-depth analysis than I could do, but I have to say it’s a wonderfully solid piece of work. There is a lot going on here - it’s dense. I had to go back and re-read secti ...