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First one was nice. Didn't even think the "other"'s send-in could be anyone other than Kenji... The reason for Rin's birth defect was Thaliomide poisoning, not misuse of medicamentation - at least in Raita's concept drawing. IIrc it was not specified in the VN itself. Dust Bath is a very ...

Miki, slumped in the futon and only partly awake, half-opened one eye - through the window behind Hisao she saw a thatch of messy blonde hair. Dark eyes met hers and winked - then they were gone. Now my thought, then, is that Akira is our Christmas agent here then? I was going to write this as a no...

Thank you so much for such a charming and gracious review - that's going under the tree as one of the nicest gifts I've received in a long time!

re: Secret Santa 2022 - S13 submission — “No Time Like The Presents” For Feurox See end for the prompt. Apologies for typos / continuity errors - I stand in the company of giants. _____________________________________________________________________ The ryokan was old - tucked away in the woods by a...

A very nice, somewhat meditative walk through the established part of the timeline and into new territory - enjoying this very much! Lower drama than what I've been reading of late, and the change was due.

"Now he just thinks I’m being dumb. The planets don’t matter. If he wants dumb though, I’ll be dumb. Maybe it’ll stop his questioning." I like this - I hadn't read this when I wrote my bit from Rin's perspective ( https://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=13275&p=247982#p247996 ), b...

Ooof - that hurt, but in a good way.

Depressing - as in "depressing that I'll never write that well."

Wonderful as in - "Wonderfully evocative and believable."

Written in the true spirit of KS - thank you.

Three years late to the party, but found this on Reddit today - seemed germane:

My $0.02, 10 years late.

This was short, poignant, and sweet - like Saki's life. I can't help but wish - like many people, I'm sure - that there was so much more to the story.

A wonderful example of emotionally evocative writing on a character who stands out with her own distinct personality.

Absolutely enthralling - a prodigious, humbling tour de force. You've set the bar for other authors almost unattainably high; I look forward to your future updates!

A perfect short epilogue - nothing missing, nothing superfluous. Totally believable and achingly poignant - bravo!

Rin's a bit more vulgar than I'm used to but I do like the mental tricks she uses. Thank you - I do appreciate the feedback! Re: Vulgarity, I agree - my representation of Rin’s internal dialog is mostly based on my experience of being a teenager - how we thought and what we said were often very dif...

Thank you again to everyone who’s made contributing to this shared narrative possible! Story Title : Mountain Pose Author : Asoko_Desu Type : Slice of life Status : Complete PoV-character : Rin Pairings : NA Begins : Before dawn Warnings : Navel Gazing - literally Remarks : We're all early risers a...

To be fair, I have to say that this is a really good piece. I'm more a "the longer, the better" type of man, but, the concept of the piece is incredibly good. Hisao's heart attack could have killed him in reality, and the fact that he's sent into a "afterlife" place is on point....

Story Title : Dust Bath Author : Asoko_Desu Type : Side-Story - part of "Adventures in the 'Emiverse'" Status : One in a series PoV-characte r: Rin, Emi Pairings : Emi x Hisao, sorta Begins : Before ‘Saving Throw’ Warnings : Possible spoilers for Emi’s Good Ending, Navel Gazing, Character...