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A perfect short epilogue - nothing missing, nothing superfluous. Totally believable and achingly poignant - bravo! Thank you for the kind words, I've also taken to reading your own series of short stories and have liked what I have seen. I know I'm super late to the game here, but I was only able ...

how long Shizune might have held unrequited love for Hisao This is an interesting take brythain, and something similar that I incorporated into my own fanfic, dealing with Hisao X Shizune following a bad ending Emi route. Even on my very first run of the game, I could tell that Shizune (and/or ...

I quite like Shizune as a character, and her design (Meganekko girls are 'chef's kiss') for one stuck out as an early contender for me. However, her route could have had a few more choices/decisions to make. I'd almost think that Shizune and Misha should have both been equal options during it, and ...

This was super cute, and I really enjoyed reading it. Good job.

I think this is outstanding, I really like it. I'd honestly like to see even more of this type of work.

It's he, mate :P That means it's not Shizune. Kenji would be a more suitable choice. Well what I took away from the piece during this exchange: “And the Other?” “This time he’ll have only one of his there.” “I’ve never understood why he gets to have any at the table with such innocents.” Is that the ...

Thank you - I've left that as an exercise for the reader 😉 "killed in a car crash" = Emi. "burnt to death" = Hanako "killed playing with her father’s power tools" = Miki "suffered congenital deformities due to the mother’s medication during pregnancy" = Rin Which leaves Lilly, Shizune, and Misha. As ...

Lap wrote: ↑Fri Apr 29, 2022 12:47 pm Any Flavor But Lemon

I do like a good smutfic from time too time, and that was a really good fic. #fansself

Re: No Good Deed. I read though this and more then once laughed on the entire set up and execution. This is just the kinda thing I could see Kenji doing completely ruining any attempt at being subtle. Emi, Hisao. Yuuko, and Kenji all seemed quite true to character and this was a very enjoyable read ...

My suggestion, though, is that a) For "Ms. Ibarazaki", if you're going to emphasize the distance, I would further stress it with something like, "THAT Ms. Ibrazaki", or "that *insert negative adjective* Ms. Ibarazaki"; b) For "Emi" The thing is, I don't view Shizune as one to be openly "jealous" of ...

A few points I'd like to discuss (as you know I like looking into details): 1. You used "Ms. Ibarazaki", "Ibarazaki", and "Emi" kind of interchangeably at the start of the passage. Is there any specific reason to do that? Because I would usually address a person consistently, unless my relationship ...

A relaxed take on Shizune helps me to appreciate the character, and you did a good job, really. You achieved to make me like Shizune, in this piece, and for that, I would say "thank you." Really pleasant reading. Thanks very much for your comments Razoredge. My story, while taking place after the ...

Cute Miki for sure, thanks for sharing.