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Thanks for the comments. I do appreciate them and hope to use them to improve my writing.

Thanks for the feedback. I agree with your comments about the tail end of the story. I started writing a couple years back and I've noticed that I tend to rush things when the end is in sight. There is always a fear that I will end up with a lot of filler if I try to stretch things out. Thanks again...

Hisao left Yamaku for university, becoming a successful business owner after graduating. Ten years after Yamaku, his life took a strange twist. This story chronicles his struggle to deal with a current tragedy which led to the reopening of old wounds. Along the way, an old friend appears to help him...

Hisao left Yamaku for university, becoming a successful business owner after graduating. Ten years after Yamaku, his life took a strange twist. This story chronicles his struggle to deal with a current tragedy which led to the reopening of old wounds. Along the way, an old friend appears to help him...