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- Thu May 30, 2024 4:08 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Dandelions: An After Story (Chapter 4 Released 5/30)
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Re: Dandelions: An After Story (Chapters 1-3 Revised)
Chapter 4: Cloud Walking (Rin) ------------------------------------ Cloudland Swing The art room. For the millionth time, I'm back here. I think I wanted to be here. I made myself come here. I grip the brush between my toes. After adjusting, I find a comfortable sitting position. I start to paint, ...
- Sat May 25, 2024 2:52 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Dandelions: An After Story (Chapter 4 Released 5/30)
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Re: Dandelions: An After Story (Chapters 1-3 Revised)
Revisions done. Chapter 4 soon.
- Fri May 24, 2024 5:01 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Dandelions: An After Story (Chapter 4 Released 5/30)
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Re: Dandelions: An After Story (Chapter 1 Revised 5/24)
Going through a few revisions. Chapter 1 revision complete. Chapters 2 and 3 (revised) soon.
- Tue May 21, 2024 1:58 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Dandelions: An After Story (Chapter 4 Released 5/30)
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Re: Dandelions: An After Story (Updated 4/10)
It's been a long, long time, and I apologize, but I'm going to try and get back on the horse. All of the stuff regarding KS Reengineered has motivated me again to write. I will come back soon and continue this. I may even go over my old work and try to improve it. Thank you for your patience.
- Sat Apr 10, 2021 6:49 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Dandelions: An After Story (Chapter 4 Released 5/30)
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Dandelions: An After Story
Chapter 3: Stretching (Emi) ------------------------------------ Standing Tall The hot summer air clings to my skin. It's the gross sticky air that stays on you all day until you shower. Reaching my arms high into that big blue sky until I feel like I can touch the clouds with my fingertips, I stre...
- Mon Apr 05, 2021 11:54 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Dandelions: An After Story (Chapter 4 Released 5/30)
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Dandelions: An After Story
Thanks for proofreading, I fixed most of it I think. And yeah I think that having a chapter be what it needs to be instead of dragging it out for too long is important, but long can be decent as well if you revise it a few times, and read it over thoroughly. I'm still experimenting with length, I th...
- Fri Apr 02, 2021 11:47 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Dandelions: An After Story (Chapter 4 Released 5/30)
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Dandelions: An After Story
Chapter 2: Show & Tell (Hisao) ------------------------------------ Daylight Rin and I decided to go for a walk outside of the school grounds. It feels like we can both breathe a little easier. Maybe it was just an excuse to get her to talk to me more, but I genuinely like the walks we've been ...
- Mon Mar 29, 2021 3:39 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Dandelions: An After Story (Chapter 4 Released 5/30)
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Re: Dandelions: An After Story (Rin's Good Ending)
Hey, I actually did read some of your writing beforehand and it was quite nice, thanks for commenting. I'm still learning of course but I do agree that putting the name in the title probably looks better. I was more "inspired" by Sisterhood in the regard that it pushed me to want to write ...
- Sun Mar 28, 2021 12:17 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Dandelions: An After Story (Chapter 4 Released 5/30)
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Dandelions: An After Story (Chapter 4 Released 5/30)
tumblr_nulbqpsS3o1ub1qjwo2_1280.png "Like those tiny seeds scattered into the wind, I'm sure that Rin too can take her place in this world without the need to create her own inside of it." Foreword Before we begin, I would just like to say a few things to lay out the groundwork for this s...