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Another brilliant chapter! I really can't wait to see what happens next!

After reading up on that, I wish to add to my comment, with a slight apology. While I still feel the description of the OC's chest was other the top, I see that it fits Katawa Shoujo (somewhat). I definitely feel that if you use what has been provided, the story's premise won't seem so far-fetched.

Another decent chapter, I am really enjoying the positive Hisao. The Hanako scene was super adorable too. I only have a small issue with how you described your OC's...bust. It felt a little bit over the top, for example, each being bigger than her head. I'm sure it was done intentionally but I don't ...

I feel like the Miki curse got shifted to Naomi and Natsume. I've been really enjoying this and I hope to see future chapters but I get the feeling this is a dead fic.

I just spent the better part of a week reading this and I was really loving it until the last 2 or 3 chapters. I feel like the story has been dragged out so much that it feels like the past few chapters are just filler. I'm not surprised you have run out of steam for this but would love to see it ...

I absolutely love this. I love everything going on with Suzu and Taro and the feeling of being left behind that Molly has is strangely relatable. Please don't let this die!

I feel like this wasn't too bad. Maybe forced in some places so it didn't exactly feel natural but it was enjoyable nonetheless.

I don't think I have seen a completed Natsume or Naomi fic out there though so I can't really compare this to anything

Made an account to mostly just to comment on this. I LOVE IT. The characters feel so alive and I cannot wait to see what comes next. I've been reading so much on here the past 1/2 months and I have stumbled on too many dead projects and I really hope to see this finished. You have also been able to ...