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- Wed Oct 07, 2020 12:29 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 26th, 2020)
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Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 26th, 2020)
I can't wait to read more of this, don't leave me hanging man! My only criticism is Hisao coming across as a bit of a pansy at first acts, but I think you planned this to be a character development thing where he became much more confident as the story progresses. Another thing is when he meets ...