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I've decided to keep a list of all the gems that BristerXD has referred to me as. Here's what I've got so far: “The Conversation Prone Wagon Spokes” [/b] “The Talk Box” [/b] “The Son Of A Disney World Architect” [/b] And Finally, “A Stupid Piece of Sh*t” [/b] —————————— You guys are in real trouble ...

An interesting premise, solid execution, and a lovely ending made this story a pleasant read! If there was any character who would have qualms working in a maid cafe, it would be Shizune, so seeing that concept in action made from some very humorous moments. Thanks for writing this!

...the conversation prone wagon spokes... Oh heck, I've been summoned. :D All in all, I think that this was another very solid installment to the story. The narrative development and progress tucked into this scene was exciting, Xeraeo's consistently strong prose and dialogue continues to shine, an...

This is fantastic. Installation was easy and your steps were clear. Thanks for sharing this with everybody!

I've been eyeing this chapter since it was posted, but today I actually have time to sit down and write about it! Here goes... I had a good time reading this! In almost every aspect, this chapter is a noticeable improvement over the first chapter. The pacing is sharper—more balanced and easily follo...

BristerXD, Nuclear Student and Feurox, I got a real kick out of reading all of your thoughts and insights regarding this story. After I found this story in late August, there were a couple of weeks where not many other folks were posting on this thread. It's nice to see some more opinions and though...

This is lovely! Thanks for drawing, Shark.bite.art. And thanks for sharing, BristerXD.

Not even an hour after I finally caught up and there's already another scene?! Haha! You're really cranking these chapters out, Xeraeo. I'm going to have trouble keeping up if you ever manage to replicate this three-a-week posting schedule in the future. :lol: Anyway, this scene was a lovely little ...

Alrighty, I finally have some time to make a post on here! I've been waiting all week to get my hands on these latest two scenes. Without further delay, I'll get down to business. :D ——————————————————— Act 2, Scene 6 (Concerns): This scene was a real shocker for me—the twist caught me completely by...

You are seeing Lilly off at the gates of Yamaku. Yet Hanako is wearing her casual outfit. Up to that point, the only other time you saw her in her casual outfit was the trip to the Jazz club. A small detail, to be sure, but it pretty strongly implies that she had no intention of ending the day once...

Hello SuperEgo, I am also a newbie here, and like Xeraeo said, I'm happy to see that you're starting a new story on these forums! Welcome. :D This was a pleasant read! I haven't read any Rika routes yet, so it's nice seeing your take on a what's essentially a brand new character for me. I'm getting ...

Okay, I finally have some time on my hands to write a response! Why are you commenting on my dumb story if you haven't finished your homework? I demand a giant essay (minimum 6 pages, 11pt font, single spaced) on Sisterhood so I can remember why I liked it so much. Uhhh... Dang. You totally caught m...

Oh, my! Scene names and a table of contents have been added. How fancy... :D This was another very solid chapter, in my opinion. I don't have quite as much to analyze this time—this chapter felt like a welcome palate cleanser after all the stress of the previous few. I noticed a lot more humor this ...

One of the interesting things about examining Hanako's route is that the character herself has a habit of over examining things. If you go in looking at the tiny details and over thinking them, odds are it's something she's over thought herself. This is a good point! Even if asking to go into the c...

1. Hanako wants a reliable relationship that treats her like an ordinary person, no kid gloves. This means just bumming around as equals, doing normal bumming around things like hanging out in town. 'Now that Lilly's not around, we can just be two ordinary people...' I'm with you on this point. I d...