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Stealthy, thank you for taking the time to read my story, and write out such detailed notes! I truly appreciate it, even if it's been years since I've touched this forum. Chatty, good to see you too. To answer the obvious question, and I'm sorry to disappoint anyone who may still care, but I don't ...

Well, I'm rather late, but this was very enjoyable to read. I'll admit I was a little lost at a few points, but learning you were writing it for BristerXD made it make a bit more sense, lol. I'm always a fan of stories that involve people being forced to confront the things they're most afraid of ...

Act 3 - Draw "Did you get to the part about the Ezo Republic yet?" Hitomi's voice behind me pulls me back to reality, and I realize that once again I've lost my concentration on my textbook, letting my thoughts drift to the events of the past couple weeks. Blinking, I quickly check where I am and ...

If I had to use the phrase "passionate about", perhaps it would apply to TMtM more than Rebound, but not by much. I care about both stories in different ways, I would say. And I've been in a long period of stalled inspiration, as you described. I'm sure I want to complete both stories, and have many ...

Oh, wow, thanks! I've been away for a while and still am right now, but I'm glad people are still interested in these stories. I actually recently came back to Rebound, reading through it again about a week ago and trying to reformulate my ideas for Chapter 10 as well as the future of the overall ...

Dunno what it is about creative writing, but I seem to stumble on grammar a little more with that than I do in other types of writing. In my experience, since creative writing is primarily right-brain driven, the normal grammar and spelling rules, etc. that you'd think about when writing something ...

Lol, I didn't get a bad impression of you. Just wasn't sure how to respond to it at the time. The more I've come to know you, the more obvious it became that that was an exaggerated response, anyway. I had forgotten about it entirely until Mirage pointed it out. And I'm not sure if it's better for ...

I second Chatty's comments, all of them. I would add that I found the combination of grief and hope to be quite effective. The reveal wasn't a shock, more like a pleasant surprise. I expected this would be only a few years after the events of the VN, maybe 5 or 10, so learning that they had such a ...

Well, to be fair there are some nuances of american culture that elude me as well. In this story specifically it was mentioning certain states like Wyoming... and I think there was another. I'm sure those states have their reputations just like the states of my home country have a reputation for me ...

Hello Xeraeo! Long time no see, eh? At least here on the Renai, that is! Anyway, I told you at some point in October that I'd get to Rebound at some point, and I'm here today to make good on my word. Let's get cracking... Sup, man! It has been a bit. Glad to be back. Also, Ichika is a sweetheart ...

she turns and enters the female dorm... I emerge from the male dorm,... Ah, one of my pet peeves. Everytime I read this I have to think of female dorms getting together with male dorms and making many small dormitories... Well, I have this many times throughout the story, lol. It bothers me too ...

Heartwarming. Thanks for this!

Mirage_GSM wrote: ↑Mon Nov 16, 2020 6:33 am So in a way it is a meta solution to a meta problem... Does that cancel out?

Fair's fair.

Mirage_GSM wrote: ↑Mon Nov 16, 2020 6:33 am I'm considering leaving yours for last ^^°

...fair's fair.

Yes, you made that point in a later chapter - which is good. Way too few fanfics acknowledge how truly shitty Lilly was acting towards Hisao in her route, and I hope that someone is going to get this through to Hisao's thick skull in this one. I tend to be a bit of a Lilly defender here, although I ...

Hey, thanks for the welcome, and glad you're enjoying this story! Even though I haven't worked on it in a while, it returns to my mind more often than you'd think, and I am continuing to develop it up there. When exactly I'll actually get back to writing it is another question. Interestingly enough ...