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- Mon Nov 18, 2024 10:09 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 5 - Chapter 1 Oct. 26th, 2024]
- Replies: 41
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Re: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 5 - Chapter 1 Oct. 26th, 2024]
I felt like, of all the relationships in the base game, the only one that had a smooth path forward after the good ending was Hanako's. Which, funny enough, is the one I think was still in the earliest parts of it and was least developed (romantically, at least). Every other relationship was more ...
- Thu Nov 14, 2024 3:41 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch84 @ 14/11/24: It's your turn!]
- Replies: 118
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Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch83 @ 17/9; Ch28 re-written 14 Oct 2024]
Chapter 84: Door Close, Door Open “Thank you.” “You’re welcome. See you next time.” Handing the woman in front of me her items and waving her goodbye, I’m glad that, without Boss around, I don’t need to use formal language in front of my customers. Three girls come in and immediately head towards th ...
- Thu Oct 31, 2024 3:21 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 5 - Chapter 1 Oct. 26th, 2024]
- Replies: 41
- Views: 47015
Re: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 5 - Chapter 1 Oct. 26th, 2024]
I've been looking forward to your update! I must say, the way you write Emi's POV is so good that I feel like you either have the same personality as her, or your partner does. As I have mentioned, I have been trying to align my story with your content, and I've given credit to you and the artists ...
- Wed Oct 09, 2024 9:48 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Don't Leave Me Behind: The story of Hara Iwanako [chapter 4 art piece: 08.10.2024]
- Replies: 13
- Views: 11240
Re: Don't Leave Me Behind: The story of Hara Iwanako [chapter 4 art piece: 08.10.2024]
As a huge fan of Iwanako, I like your idea (of making her disabled and joining her crush's school) a lot! And I notice that both of us, in our respective stories , have somewhat similar perceptions on her personality. I'm looking forward to the next update. I'm not a native English speaker either ...
- Tue Sep 17, 2024 3:52 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch84 @ 14/11/24: It's your turn!]
- Replies: 118
- Views: 178027
Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch82 @ 30 Aug 2024: Darn that phone call!]
Chapter 83: Welcome to Yamaku! Let’s double check my backpack. Wallet. Games. Lunchbox. Clothes. I should have everything I need. Let’s check the time again. 8:30. Check the hotel name again… should be the correct one. Why is she not coming out yet? Is she not going home today? Or did she avoid me o ...
- Fri Aug 30, 2024 2:26 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch84 @ 14/11/24: It's your turn!]
- Replies: 118
- Views: 178027
Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch81 @ 15 Aug 2024: Emi in Love!?]
Chapter 82: Thanks, 'Nako! Sitting across my schoolmate, I grab several decks from my bag (man, they’re heavy! But I wanna have fun!) and lay them on the table between us. “Today I’m showing you one of the most powerful decks I have assembled. But first, pick one of these. You may look at them.” My ...
- Thu Aug 15, 2024 11:16 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch84 @ 14/11/24: It's your turn!]
- Replies: 118
- Views: 178027
Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch80 @ 31 Jul 2024: Bring a girlfriend home!]
Chapter 81: A Magical Touch Sitting on a bleacher watching my trainees continue their exercise while nursing my wound, I’m currently experiencing a mixed emotion of excitement and fear. Excitement, because I just made physical contact with a boy for an extended period of time. For around two m ...
- Thu Aug 15, 2024 11:13 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch84 @ 14/11/24: It's your turn!]
- Replies: 118
- Views: 178027
Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch80 @ 31 Jul 2024: Bring a girlfriend home!]
The most unexpected thing in the KS fanfiction is the pork chop recipe in the middle of the chapter. And the whole first part of the chapter felt like an unnecessary filler, sorry. Otherwise it's good. And Hisao still keeps some secrets from Shizune, huh. It won't get him any good in the long run ...
- Tue Jul 30, 2024 10:14 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch84 @ 14/11/24: It's your turn!]
- Replies: 118
- Views: 178027
Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch79P2 @ 17 Jul 2024: Stripes and Solids remake!?]
Chapter 80: True Sense of Security “How many minutes again, Hicchan?” “It’s three-three-two.” “Got it. How about the vegetables?” “I’ve rinsed them. Will cook them in a minute.” When I asked my girlfriend the other day what food she wants for today’s lunch, her reply was short: healthy. That offered ...
- Tue Jul 16, 2024 11:46 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch84 @ 14/11/24: It's your turn!]
- Replies: 118
- Views: 178027
Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch79 @ 10 Jul 2024 and Ch26 rewritten]
(Chapter 79 continued) “Phew! What a great dash!” “Glad that you ( pant ) enjoyed it, Hisao.” “How about you, ( pant ) Tatsuya, Lilly?” “Yup. I had ( pant ) fun. How ‘bout you, dear?” “Yes. I ( pant ) never knew ( pant ) running would be ( pant ) so fun!” As I cross the finish line along with Naomi, ...
- Tue Jul 09, 2024 10:25 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch84 @ 14/11/24: It's your turn!]
- Replies: 118
- Views: 178027
Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch78 @ 3 Jul 2024 and Ch24-25 rewritten]
Chapter 79: Master of My Fate As the professor keeps droning on without a break, I try to write as many notes as possible on my textbook in attempt to get a better score in the next exam while preventing myself from falling asleep. Unfortunately, the ink seems to run out, and I haven’t brought m ...
- Tue Jul 02, 2024 11:34 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch84 @ 14/11/24: It's your turn!]
- Replies: 118
- Views: 178027
Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch77 @ 16 May 2024]
Chapter 78: Fastest Thing on...? “See you in the afternoon. 4:15, okay?” “Yup! See ya!” Waving Kai goodbye, I can’t help but smile at my energetic friend as she almost literally bounces herself into the shuttle bus towards the other side of the campus. Looking at my watch, it’s now 8:40. I should ge ...
- Fri May 17, 2024 4:15 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch84 @ 14/11/24: It's your turn!]
- Replies: 118
- Views: 178027
Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch76 @ 6 May 2024]
"Kara" does indeed mean "from", but why would you put it after the "5000 yen"? She receives the money from the customer, so if anything it would be "okyaku-sama kara..." but I'm not sure that phrase is in use... This refers to her mistake back in Chapter 55 . And yup, that phrase doesn't make any ...
- Thu May 16, 2024 4:57 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch84 @ 14/11/24: It's your turn!]
- Replies: 118
- Views: 178027
Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch76 @ 6 May 2024]
Chapter 77: Wind Air Track Ground After changing into my sports outfit, I stuff my belongings into the locker and begin my exercise routine with the stretching, which is almost exactly what I’ve been doing every day. The only exception is, today I’m covering new ground. I’m hitting a different sport ...
- Mon May 06, 2024 9:23 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune Bad End, Sisterhood plot) [Ch84 @ 14/11/24: It's your turn!]
- Replies: 118
- Views: 178027
Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Part 3 Upcoming; Rewritten Ch21@5/4/24]
Precious Friendships: Part 3 - When Love Meets Family (Reference: Uncertainty ) Chapter 76: Tough Break “Here is five thousand yen.” One, two, three, four, five. Okay. Enter 5000 into the cashier. The screen says 460. From the drawer I collect the six coins that will contribute to the amount on the ...